A Fool's Errand
A hapless tale of an inept playwright5 total reviews
Comment from JLR
You are without any doubt quite the accomplishment sonnet writer. It was great to read a well polished poet's contribution, thank you, an obvious winner on every sense.
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You are without any doubt quite the accomplishment sonnet writer. It was great to read a well polished poet's contribution, thank you, an obvious winner on every sense.
Comment Written 20-May-2023
Comment from zanya
Great line' with iambic pentameter, he fought' now that must have been an interesting and poetically furious struggle- the humor shines through here - great
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Great line' with iambic pentameter, he fought' now that must have been an interesting and poetically furious struggle- the humor shines through here - great
Comment Written 17-May-2023
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Great poem, full of humour and makes me think of myself as I sit in front of blank paper!! Perfect meter, mostly iambic, rhyming pattern very strong, and a very enjoyable read.
Good luck with the contest!!
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Great poem, full of humour and makes me think of myself as I sit in front of blank paper!! Perfect meter, mostly iambic, rhyming pattern very strong, and a very enjoyable read.
Good luck with the contest!!
Comment Written 16-May-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile here and thankfully you don't need iambic pentameter for this contest evidently, but you had a good crack at it here with only a few lumpy lines, but I loved the humour which is the main ingredient, love Dolly x
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You made me smile here and thankfully you don't need iambic pentameter for this contest evidently, but you had a good crack at it here with only a few lumpy lines, but I loved the humour which is the main ingredient, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-May-2023
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well you deserve a six if for no other reason than trying to understand what Iambic Pentameter is. Good luck. I had to retreat and restructure my initial attempt, and even then I question in the end, w.t.h. am I doing/ ;-)
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Well you deserve a six if for no other reason than trying to understand what Iambic Pentameter is. Good luck. I had to retreat and restructure my initial attempt, and even then I question in the end, w.t.h. am I doing/ ;-)
Comment Written 15-May-2023
