spring petals dancing (haiku)
a perfect pink panache4 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Lober,
This is a nice metaphor for the floating flowers. And also good personification of the water and the flowers.
I like the font color matching the flowers.
Congrats on the honorable mention in the contest.
Joan
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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Hi Lober,
This is a nice metaphor for the floating flowers. And also good personification of the water and the flowers.
I like the font color matching the flowers.
Congrats on the honorable mention in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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Hi Joan,
Very kind of you to stop bye, and offer your kind comments and support.
AT 76 it means a lot to me.
- Lobber
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You are most kindly welcome, Lobber.
Joan
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Lovely poem quite like it is pretty it's beautiful and it's sweet about Spring. I love the picture you this is your great ripples of applause I like that!
I find no issues grammatically or aesthetically to gorgeous picture. I wouldn't choose anything different. I have no suggestions for change that. Maybe I'll just stop your font a little bit for the old folks that's about it.
Beautiful picture gorgeous poem and a wonderful package creating magic great work. I hope you have an awesome day
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Lovely poem quite like it is pretty it's beautiful and it's sweet about Spring. I love the picture you this is your great ripples of applause I like that!
I find no issues grammatically or aesthetically to gorgeous picture. I wouldn't choose anything different. I have no suggestions for change that. Maybe I'll just stop your font a little bit for the old folks that's about it.
Beautiful picture gorgeous poem and a wonderful package creating magic great work. I hope you have an awesome day
Comment Written 16-May-2023
Comment from RodG
I really enjoyed this poem/photo combo. There are no water lilies in the ponds near me, yet I can visualize these petals as you describe them here dancing "a water ballet in pink."
I can even see those water ripples applauding.
Rod
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I really enjoyed this poem/photo combo. There are no water lilies in the ponds near me, yet I can visualize these petals as you describe them here dancing "a water ballet in pink."
I can even see those water ripples applauding.
Rod
Comment Written 14-May-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine Haiku here and I loved the scene created here as those petals dancing a pink ballet and we appreciate the scene, a well deserved six for me, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-May-2023
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A fine Haiku here and I loved the scene created here as those petals dancing a pink ballet and we appreciate the scene, a well deserved six for me, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-May-2023
reply by the author on 14-May-2023
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Hi My Friend,
Six stars from you is like receiving a dozen.
I hope they bring luck.
Have a super day!
- Lobber
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Well deserved and I hope you win the contest, love Dolly x