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Passion For Poetry

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Book 3 of assorted poems

5 total reviews 
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Excellent
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Or not. Just kidding. When things sound too serious I laugh.
That being said, you do have a poem that is expressive and fits the contest. Your presentation supports your words well. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
    Thank you Alexandra, I appreciate your fine comments and your awesome review. Always happy to see your name come up so, I hope you're having an awesome evening and thank you again!
Comment from Douglas Goff
Excellent
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Lea, your work is always so interestingly entertaining. I enjoy your poetry and the facet that you always match the tone with the perfect picture and color scheme. I am not sure how much time you put into your presentation, but it always feels like you have really thought them out. Nice. Very nice.
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 Comment Written 20-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
    Thank you Douglas for your phone review and you're awesome comment. I very much appreciated the poetry comes out in a flow, it just comes over me and it flashes out of my head. Sometimes I edit it sometimes I don't. Just depends. I appreciate your comments and your fine review. I really like the frog picture! Thank you again!
Comment from JSD
Good
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Not as immediate as others you write, but intriguing and enigmatic nonetheless. As usual, it is the last line that spikes the interest, especially with its careful choice of words which I've come to expect from you. I get the feeling this one is one which could do with a rework? Either that or I'm just being a bit dense. Sorry. x

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
    No this is one that definitely Needs a riddle for sure and some tweaking absolutely uh usually. I poked through them before I reached submit them again like. I'll reach I'll put them out there initially. I'll let them have their 2 reviews and then I'll leave them alone until it's close to contest fun at that point I started to go through him. Again like this one. I should do so sooner though absolutely. You are a wellspring of good tips I thank you so very much!
reply by JSD on 13-Jun-2023
    Ah, yet again you're telling me useful things. So you can back and rework, even after 'entry'?
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
    Yes I sure do I'm always I'm looking at it never satisfied. I just changed the Hong-Kong. I think it will make it more understandable to you. I can explain a little bit after you might be perplexed even yet but what you might be interested to know is that I run a website it's called. The Oracle i work as a medium a little controversial
    I know but it may help you understand the poem a little bit better with the change
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
    Yes I sure do I'm always I'm looking at it never satisfied. I just changed the Hong-Kong. I think it will make it more understandable to you. I can explain a little bit after you might be perplexed even yet but what you might be interested to know is that I run a website it's called. The Oracle i work as a medium a little controversial
    I know but it may help you understand the poem a little bit better with the change
reply by JSD on 13-Jun-2023
    Yeah. That works better. Well done. I have no problem with Medium, although I'm more of a Small. No, seriously, I have no doubt this world is not all there is. x
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
    Absolutely correct as I said in one line of my phone. This life is corporeal lis. It ring in a tree or ripple in the pond a day in class and the bell rings at 3...
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
    Absolutely correct as I said in one line of my phone. This life is corporeal lis. It ring in a tree or ripple in the pond a day in class and the bell rings at 3...
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
    Is ha ha you're funny by the way
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Lea.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good description of home and
a very good second line.
-A good closing line with the "worlds veil."
-Good luck in the contest.
-I use a PC and it is set at 120 per cent.
Your font is very small. Also: world's veil.

 Comment Written 14-May-2023

reply by the author on 14-May-2023
    Thank you so much Pam for your review I appreciate it! Make sure it's correct oh yeah I'm the fault too as well. Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments and for your time and in a helpful hint I would appreciate it by me and hope your day is awesome!
reply by Pam (respa) on 14-May-2023
    You are very welcome for the review and comments, as well as the helpful hint, Lea. Hope you have a great day, too.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Excellent
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So many secrets are hidden behind closed doors and the evidence is in plain sight and everybody ignores it and pretends the truth does not exist, a poignant write and the last line reveals all as the truth is about to blow, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-May-2023

reply by the author on 14-May-2023
    Thank you that's really correct you a lot so much more than. We know the succession is just a thin line among many the ripple in the pond the ring in a tree