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An apprentice reflects3 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
I really enjoyed that story. It kept me engaged and mystified. So much history and emotion drew the reader in and kept them wondering what was going to happen.
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I really enjoyed that story. It kept me engaged and mystified. So much history and emotion drew the reader in and kept them wondering what was going to happen.
Comment Written 15-May-2023
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This would make a great novel. What is it that everyone was so scared of, and what happened to everyone when she was a child that seems to be happening now? Very creepy story and I'd really love to read more. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
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This would make a great novel. What is it that everyone was so scared of, and what happened to everyone when she was a child that seems to be happening now? Very creepy story and I'd really love to read more. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 14-May-2023
Comment from Lea Tonin1
This is a very cool story! Very engaging and entertaining from beginning to end great job!
Your characters are very vibrant and engaging. Your little girl Ludana, great job on her character!
Actually I wanted this story to keep going l o l
I found no grammatical issues with your story my client. Lynn I would change nothing congratulations on a great right I hope you have an awesome evening!
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This is a very cool story! Very engaging and entertaining from beginning to end great job!
Your characters are very vibrant and engaging. Your little girl Ludana, great job on her character!
Actually I wanted this story to keep going l o l
I found no grammatical issues with your story my client. Lynn I would change nothing congratulations on a great right I hope you have an awesome evening!
Comment Written 13-May-2023
