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Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Sunni,
You show thanks for the world and shows how man has time and direction he needs to understand life. But it also reminds us we need God to help us to choose the right track.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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Hi Sunni,
You show thanks for the world and shows how man has time and direction he needs to understand life. But it also reminds us we need God to help us to choose the right track.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 13-May-2023
Comment from royowen
When Adam and Eve were given life, one of the conditions of occupancy was stewardship, but self entered the equation and the pandemic took root, and I don't think anyone really keeps that agreement, beautifully written Alicia, blessings Roy
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When Adam and Eve were given life, one of the conditions of occupancy was stewardship, but self entered the equation and the pandemic took root, and I don't think anyone really keeps that agreement, beautifully written Alicia, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-May-2023
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Of course you believe as you wish, Sunni. I enjoyed your
poem. I liked the idea of the sun, moon, and stars influencing
our actions--so true. You expressed your thoughts and feelings
well. I liked the last two lines.
No offense ever.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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Of course you believe as you wish, Sunni. I enjoyed your
poem. I liked the idea of the sun, moon, and stars influencing
our actions--so true. You expressed your thoughts and feelings
well. I liked the last two lines.
No offense ever.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 12-May-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Being destroyed by the weather is just how I feel this week, it has rained hard and it has been cold today, where is the sun? A fine write Alicia, faithful and honest love Dolly x
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Being destroyed by the weather is just how I feel this week, it has rained hard and it has been cold today, where is the sun? A fine write Alicia, faithful and honest love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-May-2023
Comment from lyenochka
I like how you formulated all your considerations about living on our planet and the need to stop destruction. My favorite line was the last one asking "God, am I running in your direction?" because we really should always be asking if we are following God's will in all we do.
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I like how you formulated all your considerations about living on our planet and the need to stop destruction. My favorite line was the last one asking "God, am I running in your direction?" because we really should always be asking if we are following God's will in all we do.
Comment Written 12-May-2023
