An April Fool
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your radio acrostic, Sunni.
I liked the formatting of the lines--esp the way
EADIO stands out. Your words flowed smoothly and
made a great statement about radios then and now.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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You did a great job with your radio acrostic, Sunni.
I liked the formatting of the lines--esp the way
EADIO stands out. Your words flowed smoothly and
made a great statement about radios then and now.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 12-May-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I actually love the radio more than the TV as I never have time to watch, but don't mind listening. My TV is more off than on. A fine tribute to the radio Alicia, love Dolly x
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I actually love the radio more than the TV as I never have time to watch, but don't mind listening. My TV is more off than on. A fine tribute to the radio Alicia, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-May-2023
Comment from Ben Colder
I remember seeing and hearing my first. 1943, a small Crosby that a neighbor had who always listened to the ongoing war news. I thought it was the coolest thing. Your post is good.
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I remember seeing and hearing my first. 1943, a small Crosby that a neighbor had who always listened to the ongoing war news. I thought it was the coolest thing. Your post is good.
Comment Written 12-May-2023
Comment from lyenochka
Radio played such a big role in human history and now we listen to podcasts and watch YouTube. But it's always good to know we can return to old-time radio. Nicely done acrostic.
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Radio played such a big role in human history and now we listen to podcasts and watch YouTube. But it's always good to know we can return to old-time radio. Nicely done acrostic.
Comment Written 12-May-2023
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Good one! Find example of the acrostic poem. It's a quite relevant and today reference so very good as it has universal appeal. Everyone listens to the radio!
I like the artwork choice as well it's quite nice to look upon colourful.
I see no issues grammatically and I have no problem with spelling punctuation sentence structure or grammar it all is well in line. It's aesthetically pleasing and a relevant acrostic written for today's scenes. Good luck in the contest I hope you have a great night!
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Good one! Find example of the acrostic poem. It's a quite relevant and today reference so very good as it has universal appeal. Everyone listens to the radio!
I like the artwork choice as well it's quite nice to look upon colourful.
I see no issues grammatically and I have no problem with spelling punctuation sentence structure or grammar it all is well in line. It's aesthetically pleasing and a relevant acrostic written for today's scenes. Good luck in the contest I hope you have a great night!
Comment Written 12-May-2023
