Pirate Blackbeard
Old nasty pirate3 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
That is one tough looking pirate. I certainly wouldn't want to meet him and especially tick him off in any way. It does look like he could hide things in that long hair and beard.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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That is one tough looking pirate. I certainly wouldn't want to meet him and especially tick him off in any way. It does look like he could hide things in that long hair and beard.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-May-2023
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Thank you! I hope I win!
Comment from mermaids
Blackbeard looks quite menacing in this picture. I can just imagine a few hens in his beard. Your words well describe this pirate who was feared by many.
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Blackbeard looks quite menacing in this picture. I can just imagine a few hens in his beard. Your words well describe this pirate who was feared by many.
Comment Written 11-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Thank you! I'm glad you found it humorous.
Comment from shelley kaye
fun limerick with good rhyme and flow
however, the syllable count is off
The Limerick has a set rhyme scheme of : a-a-b-b-a with a syllable structure of: 9-9-6-6-9.
this is 8-8-5-5-8
other than that, it is a good humourous limerick
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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fun limerick with good rhyme and flow
however, the syllable count is off
The Limerick has a set rhyme scheme of : a-a-b-b-a with a syllable structure of: 9-9-6-6-9.
this is 8-8-5-5-8
other than that, it is a good humourous limerick
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 11-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Thank you for your help and kind review! I have changed the syllables as suggested. It is well now.
