The Creepy Cookout
An eerie story for the summer time3 total reviews
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This was quite an interesting story. Nice flow, good details. I could feel the fear that the three women felt. I held my breath when they talked about the sticks towards the end of the story. Very captivating. Best of luck!
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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This was quite an interesting story. Nice flow, good details. I could feel the fear that the three women felt. I held my breath when they talked about the sticks towards the end of the story. Very captivating. Best of luck!
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Hi Monica Chaddick, Thank you for the comments, excellent rating, and good luck wishes. I appreciate that you took the time to read my story and make comments. Have a blessed weekend!
Comment from Wendy G
What a risk they were running. I think their guilt and fear of getting caught might have taken away any pleasure from the jewels! You wrote the story well. Sending good wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-May-2023
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What a risk they were running. I think their guilt and fear of getting caught might have taken away any pleasure from the jewels! You wrote the story well. Sending good wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-May-2023
reply by the author on 13-May-2023
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Hi Wendy G! Thank you for the excellent rating, feedback, and good wishes. I appreciate that you took the time to read my story and make comments. Have a blessed week and a Happy Mother's Day!
Comment from Shirley McLain
A very intense story that you did a great job in writing. I think it could have ended differently, but I'm not the writer. I enjoyed reading it. You put in a lot of graphic detail that really brought the ick out. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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A very intense story that you did a great job in writing. I think it could have ended differently, but I'm not the writer. I enjoyed reading it. You put in a lot of graphic detail that really brought the ick out. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Hi Shirley! Thank you for the feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate that you took the time to read my story and make comments. Have a blessed weekend and a Happy Mother's Day!
