Guided by Faith
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Comment from Lea Tonin1
This is a very nice story, nice indeed. I also enjoyed your office notice as well. You're very thorough and concise writer. I'm glad it was only a scary movie freaking out your character scary stuff is this scary l o l. Thank you for a very fine right? I was carried from beginning to and good story. I'm very interesting characters. I find no grammatical errors and it's aesthetically pleasing. It is obvious to see that you put in some work into creating a story answer and giving your characters all the more depth.
Thank you for your submission I wish you the best of luck hope you have a great afternoon!
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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This is a very nice story, nice indeed. I also enjoyed your office notice as well. You're very thorough and concise writer. I'm glad it was only a scary movie freaking out your character scary stuff is this scary l o l. Thank you for a very fine right? I was carried from beginning to and good story. I'm very interesting characters. I find no grammatical errors and it's aesthetically pleasing. It is obvious to see that you put in some work into creating a story answer and giving your characters all the more depth.
Thank you for your submission I wish you the best of luck hope you have a great afternoon!
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from royowen
So, it seems that Molly needs someone to watch over her. And she's got the perfect one in Seth, I always your morally upright characters, they make perfect sense in a world that's lost it's moral direction, well done, blessings Riy
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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So, it seems that Molly needs someone to watch over her. And she's got the perfect one in Seth, I always your morally upright characters, they make perfect sense in a world that's lost it's moral direction, well done, blessings Riy
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Our world has lost direction and here in the US, more and more people are breaking away from Christianity. It scares me. I continue to pray. Thank you for the kind review.
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Scripture says there will be a falling away, yours is a little more advanced, probably a great concentration.
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True, one of our school shooting was because it was a Christian school. I have heard an elderly man was praying on a park bench and was shot for praying. It's things like this are scary.
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Yep that?s right
Comment from Shirley McLain
I think that scary movie just brought them closer together. You did a great job, and I enjoyed reading the chapter. Have a wonderful afternoon. Shirley
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I think that scary movie just brought them closer together. You did a great job, and I enjoyed reading the chapter. Have a wonderful afternoon. Shirley
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you for the understanding.
Comment from estory
You had a nice humorous scene here with Seth rescuing Emma from the scary movie. He barges in, gun drawn, and finds her under the covers, watching this movie. Pretty good unlooked for turn of events. I was expecting some kind of confrontation with a bad guy. And you used the opportunity to push these two closer into each other's arms. Strong dialogue again. estory
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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You had a nice humorous scene here with Seth rescuing Emma from the scary movie. He barges in, gun drawn, and finds her under the covers, watching this movie. Pretty good unlooked for turn of events. I was expecting some kind of confrontation with a bad guy. And you used the opportunity to push these two closer into each other's arms. Strong dialogue again. estory
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Teri7
Barbara, This is a very well written chapter. You used very good descriptive words and I think you are right to take the relationship slow. I hope things are improving for your husband. love and prayers, Teri
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Barbara, This is a very well written chapter. You used very good descriptive words and I think you are right to take the relationship slow. I hope things are improving for your husband. love and prayers, Teri
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
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you are so welcome!! love and blessings, Teri
Comment from danielrose19991
thank you This series of lessons was designed to meet the needs of gifted children for extension beyond the standard curriculum with the greatest ease of use for the educator.
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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thank you This series of lessons was designed to meet the needs of gifted children for extension beyond the standard curriculum with the greatest ease of use for the educator.
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Not really sure what this review is about.
Comment from Sankey
Sorry I am a bit late coming by here, today. This was a good read and I can't wait to find out what happens about the Crown driver. A couple of things to look at. Either (to)sell in the Chihuahua Desert."
OR (for sale)in the Chihuahua Desert."
Be sure to lock (the) front door.
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Sorry I am a bit late coming by here, today. This was a good read and I can't wait to find out what happens about the Crown driver. A couple of things to look at. Either (to)sell in the Chihuahua Desert."
OR (for sale)in the Chihuahua Desert."
Be sure to lock (the) front door.
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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I appreciate the catches. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I very much enjoyed reading this chapter. Characterization and dialogue were believable. Seth is well-trained but accidentally mis-read a scream. Better safe than sorry, seems to be his motto. Emma sounds very tender-hearted but still willing to take a risk on other people's movie recommendations.
One tiny suggestion or two: With raised eyebrows Jake said, "If you believe that, I have ocean front property for sell in the Chihuahua Desert."
Try: With raised eyebrows, Jake said, "If you believe that, I have ocean front property for sale in the Chihuahua Desert."
Also, it was educational to look up the word 'beignet.' I have never seen them labeled as such in my home state. However, I have yet to walk into a new French bakery south of us, and I'd like to bet they have them.
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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I very much enjoyed reading this chapter. Characterization and dialogue were believable. Seth is well-trained but accidentally mis-read a scream. Better safe than sorry, seems to be his motto. Emma sounds very tender-hearted but still willing to take a risk on other people's movie recommendations.
One tiny suggestion or two: With raised eyebrows Jake said, "If you believe that, I have ocean front property for sell in the Chihuahua Desert."
Try: With raised eyebrows, Jake said, "If you believe that, I have ocean front property for sale in the Chihuahua Desert."
Also, it was educational to look up the word 'beignet.' I have never seen them labeled as such in my home state. However, I have yet to walk into a new French bakery south of us, and I'd like to bet they have them.
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you for the catch on sale/sell. I can't believe I did that. LOL Beignets are great. I had my first one in New Orleans. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Wendy G
I am surprised she left her curtains open with that creepy guy in the Crown Vic always in the vicinity. She snuggles up to Seth for comfort yet still not willing to admit an attraction? They need to sort themselves out quickly. Lol. Everyone else can see it. Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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I am surprised she left her curtains open with that creepy guy in the Crown Vic always in the vicinity. She snuggles up to Seth for comfort yet still not willing to admit an attraction? They need to sort themselves out quickly. Lol. Everyone else can see it. Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Emma doesn't know about the creepy guy. Seth hasn't told her. Neither wants to admit the attraction. LOL I think Seth is worried about her age and getting hurt again, and Emma thinks he's bossy. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
The story is well-written and engaging, with realistic dialogue and character interactions. It has a casual and easy-to-read tone, making it a quick and enjoyable read.
Well done.
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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The story is well-written and engaging, with realistic dialogue and character interactions. It has a casual and easy-to-read tone, making it a quick and enjoyable read.
Well done.
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
