Comment from Cindy Decker 2

Exceptional

Author,
Your beautiful work struck a cord. You use passionate words and speak the truth about our Lord.
Good luck in the contest!
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 08-May-2023

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reply by the author on 08-May-2023

Hi Cindy, thank you! The truth often speaks more voluminous then mere words.

Comment from jaded831

Exceptional

Faith you feel with your heart, God has bestowed many blessings on us. Unfortunately many people have forgotten how to live by His rules. They hide behind religion and the church, but forget actions are more powerful than words. Thank you for sucha powerful poem reflecting these sentiments.

 Comment Written 08-May-2023

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reply by the author on 08-May-2023

Thank you very much for these six stars. They are, of course, representative of your deep faith, which I applaud. Have a splendid week filled with smiles and a deep sense of gratitude.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

An excellent Biblical acrostic, and a thought-provoking image. Your notes are also interesting and informative. Sending you best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 07-May-2023

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reply by the author on 08-May-2023

My sincere thanks for the good wishes.

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

The image presentation is nice but would it perhaps look more presentable to the left side being it is acrostic poem? Just a suggestion. Notes are always appreciated. No syllable count being its an acrostic poem.

 Comment Written 07-May-2023

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reply by the author on 08-May-2023

Rosemary thanks a good suggestion,

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Great job with your biblical word acrostic poem. It describes our Heavenly Father's attributes well using the Hebrew ABBA for the focus.
Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 07-May-2023

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reply by the author on 07-May-2023

Thank you, Helen

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello, Mystery Poet,
Beautifully rendered.
You have captured your "personal relationship with God" in a way that is approachable and understandable.

Much enjoyed.

Best Wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 07-May-2023

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reply by the author on 07-May-2023

Diane, thank you, and have a splendid week ahead.

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Well done, save for EXHAUSTABLE love. Shouldn't that be inexhaustible?
Good piece of work to begin a sabbath morning. Now, is the time for all men and women and ... never mind ... to raise their voices in hymns and praise.

 Comment Written 07-May-2023

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reply by the author on 07-May-2023

Duh.....what was I thinking....oh! I wasn't thinking 😒😒

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Yes, He is our Father and there is none other. In learning this, one can understand why the none-catholic saints go directly to Jesus. I see nothing with this.

 Comment Written 06-May-2023

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reply by the author on 07-May-2023

Ben most certainly, thanks for your comments.

Comment from Janel Mock

Excellent

Powerful and simple. I enjoyed learning something new while reading this beautiful piece. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece! I look forward to reading more of your work! ~Janel

 Comment Written 06-May-2023

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reply by the author on 07-May-2023

Janel. Thank you.

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is clear and concise. I like your poem. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Nice work! Good luck! Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 06-May-2023

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reply by the author on 07-May-2023

Thanks Raul.