Comment from Monica Chaddick

Exceptional

This is so simple, yet so beautiful and so true. You have expressed mountains of faith in those few words. It is a wonderful thing when we can feel His presence and know in our hearts that He is there for us. That is the problem in the world today - there is no belief, no faith, no trust that He is there for us. Best of luck to you!!!

 Comment Written 05-May-2023

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reply by the author on 05-May-2023

Thanks, Monica. You are right. The world is full of people with no faith.

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Exceptional

A really well done 5-5-5 poem and so true! How does anyone survive without prayer and believing in God. I see no errors and feel your poem in perfect.

 Comment Written 05-May-2023

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reply by the author on 05-May-2023

Thanks, Roxanna. There are too many nonbelievers in the world today.

Comment from Janel Mock

Excellent

This is a powerful poem about prayer and I admire you for writing this! We all need some prayer in our life during the times we are facing and currently are in. Thank you for sharing! ~Janel

 Comment Written 05-May-2023

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reply by the author on 05-May-2023

Thanks, Janel. These are certainly troubled times that we are living in.

reply by Janel Mock on 05-May-2023

Absolutely. And i especially appreciate this poem because we are running out of people in this word to speak the truth? you are one of his angels!

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Your poetry is simple and to the point. The artwork gives more meaning to the words you have written. You have done an excellent job with the writing prompt. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-May-2023

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reply by the author on 05-May-2023

Thanks, PBB. I only know simple.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Firstly, you seen to have the correct format for this contest.
Secondly, you chose a subject to which, most people can relate. You also have a bit of intrigue because of the words you chose to use 'disarray.''

Now you have me wondering what the heck happened to you. So needless to say, I enjoyed your poem and I think it's good.

 Comment Written 05-May-2023

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reply by the author on 05-May-2023

Thanks, Alexandra. What happened to me was that I was put on this earth in very troubled times.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

This very short poem is a sermon we all need to hear when our lives "are in disarray." Pray and God will listen to what you have to say. Your message is succinct and comes through clearly. Rod

 Comment Written 05-May-2023

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reply by the author on 05-May-2023

Thanks, Rod. Most of the world is in disarray.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi,
This mono rhyme poem tells of the power of faith and prayer. It gives hope that we all have help when we need it if we can't seem to find it elsewhere.
Good luck with the prompts.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

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 Comment Written 05-May-2023

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reply by the author on 05-May-2023

Thanks, Joan. Many times God is the last resort, where He should have been the first choice.

reply by dragonpoet on 06-May-2023

My pleasure. You are so right.
Joan

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You have a good message about
kneeling to pray with life gets difficult,
and that God will always listen.
-Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 05-May-2023

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reply by the author on 05-May-2023

Thanks, Pam. As I get older, it seems that I'm doing this more often.

reply by Pam (respa) on 05-May-2023

You are welcome. I think many things change as we get older, and this is a very good one to add to our lives.