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Comment from LJbutterfly
I like this form of poetry. Is the Merry-go-Rhyme your creation? If I get the nerve to try poetry, I may try it. I appreciate the poetic information you provided about Sanku. I'll have to pop over to her profile to read some of her work. Thanks for introducing us to her.
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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I like this form of poetry. Is the Merry-go-Rhyme your creation? If I get the nerve to try poetry, I may try it. I appreciate the poetic information you provided about Sanku. I'll have to pop over to her profile to read some of her work. Thanks for introducing us to her.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Lorraine, as always, you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem for all of my friends hereI am very blessed with family and friends, as I count you as one of those blessings.
With that being said, would it be ok if I ask when your birthday?. If you gave it to me before, it somehow didn't make it to my birthday folder.
Yes, the Merry~go~Rhyme is mine, because I always thought it reminded me of having fun. And there is nothing more fun than building another one up with caring on their birthday. I wish I could show you a picture that my granddaughter sketched for it.,,,,, thanks again..awesomme
Thanks again, my dear friend.
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Hi, Dear Debi,
My birthday is July 13. If you get a chance to read "Lies We Tell Children" in my portfolio, I tell the story about my young daughter when she found out about bad luck on Friday the 13th. Thank you for asking about my birthday.
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Lorraine, thank you so much for that reminder. I think you told me about this once before and your date, and I get busy and then can't find them it I don't write myself a note. So you are now in my birthday book and your story I am going to try to get to today sometime. I can't wait.. love ya Sweetie!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
nice presentation and image
notes are appreciated
the merry go round style of poetry
syllable count not necessary
great lines regarding a friend's birthday.
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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nice presentation and image
notes are appreciated
the merry go round style of poetry
syllable count not necessary
great lines regarding a friend's birthday.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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You are so kind and sweet my friend. And I do appreciate such thoughtful words and the kind review. I am always honored by both of them. I appreciate you more than you could possibly know.' Thank you again dear friend
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Debi, you're always so nice in your replying,
Comment from Terry Broxson
Santha was born on Cinco de Mayo! Well, that is party time in Mexico and certainly in Texas, so I will raise one in her honor. Debi, your birthday tributes shine a light of fun for everyone. Well done. Terry.
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Santha was born on Cinco de Mayo! Well, that is party time in Mexico and certainly in Texas, so I will raise one in her honor. Debi, your birthday tributes shine a light of fun for everyone. Well done. Terry.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Terry, you are so kind. I thank you so very much for your kind review and words for my poem for Santha. It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
After reading your review yesterday, we went out to eat last night and I had to have Mexican. I had the best margarita I have ever had. Thanks for the idea!
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LOL, Cheers!
Comment from Anne Johnston
Thank you, Debi, for sharing this beautiful birthday poem for Santha. I am just reading this now, so hope she had a wonderful birthday, with lots of surprises and blessings.
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you, Debi, for sharing this beautiful birthday poem for Santha. I am just reading this now, so hope she had a wonderful birthday, with lots of surprises and blessings.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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You are so kind and sweet my friend. And I do appreciate such thoughtful words and the kind review. I am always honored by both of them. I appreciate you more than you could possibly know.' Thank you again dear friend
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You are very welcome, Debi. I appreciate you as well
Comment from Janel Mock
You are so creative with your words and thoughts and it is truly inspiring. I am thankful to have some awesome poets to read their work and grow as a writer! Thank you for sharing! ~Janel
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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You are so creative with your words and thoughts and it is truly inspiring. I am thankful to have some awesome poets to read their work and grow as a writer! Thank you for sharing! ~Janel
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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You are so kind and sweet my friend. And I do appreciate such thoughtful words and the kind review. I am always honored by both of them. I appreciate you more than you could possibly know.' Thank you again dear friend
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is another lovely merry-go-round birtday poem. You get such a great rhythm in these poems Debi. And it was lovely to find out a bit more about Sanku. You do add a bit more birtday cheer, I'm sure Santha would agree. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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This is another lovely merry-go-round birtday poem. You get such a great rhythm in these poems Debi. And it was lovely to find out a bit more about Sanku. You do add a bit more birtday cheer, I'm sure Santha would agree. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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You are so kind and sweet my friend. And I do appreciate such thoughtful words and the kind review. I am always honored by both of them. I appreciate you more than you could possibly know.' Thank you again dear friend
Comment from BermyBye50
Debi,
This is an excellent tribute Merry~go~Rhyme poem honoring your friend Santha's birthday. One thing I've valued and appreciated here on Fanstory is the wealth of talented writers and poets from whom I am privileged to learn.
I've never heard of, read or seen a Merry~go~Rhyme poem before. Thank you for introducing me to a new poetry form.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Debi,
This is an excellent tribute Merry~go~Rhyme poem honoring your friend Santha's birthday. One thing I've valued and appreciated here on Fanstory is the wealth of talented writers and poets from whom I am privileged to learn.
I've never heard of, read or seen a Merry~go~Rhyme poem before. Thank you for introducing me to a new poetry form.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Thanks so much Eugene. I appreciate your very kind words for this poem for Santha, as she has been a kind reviewer for quite sometime. She was here long before me, so I am thankful that I get to know so many friends like her and like you.
My Merry~go~Rhymes are one of my own inventions. They are perfect for those kinds of poems that are breezy and fun to do. The middle can be anything you want, as long as they have rhyme.
Anyway, thank you again for the lovely and kind review my friend.
Comment from Douglas Goff
So guide me Obi-wan. Sanku is a form f poetry, but was she actually a person or am I just reading too much into this.
I have to be an over thinker Debi, just to keep up with the rest of you.
Thanks
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reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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So guide me Obi-wan. Sanku is a form f poetry, but was she actually a person or am I just reading too much into this.
I have to be an over thinker Debi, just to keep up with the rest of you.
Thanks
D
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Haha! Hi there dear friend. I have missed you. Ok, Sanku is our fellow author. Her real name is Santha. Not Santa, like autocorrect would have you believe. And the Merry~go~Rhymes is a poem type that I made up to have more fun w some posts. Feel free to try one. Lol.. Thanks for the fun review.
I know what you mean about overthinking. I have had to train myself to no longer do that.
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Ahhh okay that makes sense. Trying to keep up with the big dogs!
Comment from Raul1
It's a beautifully written dedication to her and it is a wonderful read. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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It's a beautifully written dedication to her and it is a wonderful read. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Hi Raul, I thank you with all my heart for this lovely review and kind words for my poem for Santha.
You are so sweet and I appreciate you so very much, my dear friend.
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You're welcome, my friend!
Comment from Regina Elliott
Darn, I'm out of 6 stars, dearest friend, such a loving
birthday tribute poem to
another poet. You've penned
it so superbly. The photo is
so beauteous, enhancing the
poem. Bravo! Many of
God's blessings to you!
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Darn, I'm out of 6 stars, dearest friend, such a loving
birthday tribute poem to
another poet. You've penned
it so superbly. The photo is
so beauteous, enhancing the
poem. Bravo! Many of
God's blessings to you!
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Oh Regina, thanks so much your your awesome review and comments for Santha's Poem. Virtual sixes are just as big of a complement and appreciated just as much. You so incredibly kind, my dear friend.
