Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Very; retty and lovely words. I enjoyed the alliteration that you used anc your very colorful we words, full of imagery. Good writng! Best wishes, Alex

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

a great haibun - well-written prose part and wonderfully imagistic haiku - i like the alliteration of the p words -

may i suggest a dark green background and a white font to blend with the cool pic? just a thought ;)


thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

We have this flower in abundance in the park and I think the petals shed very quickly, I enjoyed your tribute to this flower Alicia, they brighten up my park, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Sunnilicious , A pretty flower and I am sure would be a welcome addition to any garden I look bright and delicate
Well done in reaching this number in your April challenge a busy month
Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Hooray for tiny flowers. The ones in your picture remind me of alyssum which has a nice fragrance. Another one with tiny white flowers is the candytuft and that is fun, too. I especially liked your alliterative "pretty petite peak plays part". Great job finishing and best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

I like you use of the literary technique of alliteration, especially the p's. I recently learned to pronounce words with the letter p & b creates a little explosion or popping. You final stanza is onomatopoeically animated. Whew...lots of popping going on. Well done.

 Comment Written 03-May-2023