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Live the best you can.

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Comment from Paul McFarland
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This poem is your very best effort in meter. I know you are tired of hearing this, but your ideas are great, and if your meter was perfect, your poems would be great.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
    My poem is great.
reply by Paul McFarland on 30-Apr-2023
    I repeat. Your ideas are great.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
    So is my poems.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A hopeful write full of good advice, especially forgiving someone who did us wrong, I enjoyed your musings here, have a great Sunday what ever you are doing, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
    Thanks!