Comment from Nancie E Kovacs

Average

I liked this.
Seems appropriate for me on this cold rainy day her.
Makes me thirsty:)
I enjoyed it even tho I'm a whiskey drinker.
I am no expert on reviewing poetry so I don't have much advice. I enjoyed it is all I know:))

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

and spriters <-- typo? did you mean spritzer?

this was a wonderfully tasty poem about wine
intriguing word choices for great imagery
smooth rhyme and flow

only thing i can suggest is maybe try a reddish background with a yellow or white font? to blend with the cool picture?
just a thought i had as i was reading...


sweet poem!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Fortunately I donk drink anymore but I did like a drink at one time, and I loved a good drop of red or white, but it didn't like me, so it had to go. This is a great post dear Alicia, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

It's white wine for me Alicia if you are pouring and cheers to wine as I enjoy a nice glass with my supper, as long as we don't abuse alcohol, it has a place in society, a fine post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Wine is always fashionable and in good taste in old times and modern. I like how you listed " blushes, sangrias and spriters for a swirl" and challenged the reader to think about their choice of which wine.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023