Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

A lovely set of two poems. The first one shows the joy of nurturing love and helping kids to know they are loved and to show love. The second one shows the importance of nurturing that love even when apart and that forgiveness is part of loving. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 02-May-2023

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reply by the author on 02-May-2023

Thanks

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is a good poem about the little things in life that matter most Your words described why supporting friends is what you do. The image goes well with your words also. I enjoyed reading your poem. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023

Thanks!

reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023

You mean great poems!

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

Little things in life are important. You have covered many of them, Darla, and it appears that these little things are things that make a big difference.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

Thanks!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Being polite to each other and appreciating what others say and do for us means a lot and sharing other people's lives is often magical, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

Thanks!

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful and very well written sweet poem you have penned for your book. You used very kind and loving words also. Beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

Two poems

reply by Teri7 on 29-Apr-2023

names of poems and names of contests please

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

You said this this was a well written poem for my book. I wrote two poems about little things.

reply by the author on 02-May-2023

I am in the best day of your life contest. My entry: My High School Graduation Day

Comment from Jim Wile

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem full of good advice about being a good person. They are all little aspects of the giant thing that is kindness, as briefly summarized by the Golden Rule.

This reminds me of the advice my mother used to give me when growing up, and that all parents should give their kids. It's such a shame when these simple things aren't passed along because together they make the world a better place to live in. Thank you for sharing these wonderful thoughts with us. Jim

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In the third line, did you mean to say "fears" instead of "tears?"

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

Poems. Thanks!

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

Thanks!