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8 Words or Less poem2 total reviews
Comment from Mario PIERRE
I think this poem is powerful by the capitalisation and small lettering ....they make a big difference in terms of affirmation: small I would assume a person not having it all, not 'loved' until she became 'YOU'.
Very different poem.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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I think this poem is powerful by the capitalisation and small lettering ....they make a big difference in terms of affirmation: small I would assume a person not having it all, not 'loved' until she became 'YOU'.
Very different poem.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Thanks Mario for your analysis and positive feedback!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well, that makes you think! Excellent spiritual/philosophical words neatly contained with dramatic visual . I like the way your words are all lower case but for the I and the You which then give greater emphasis to the context. Well done and good luck in the contest! Debbie
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Well, that makes you think! Excellent spiritual/philosophical words neatly contained with dramatic visual . I like the way your words are all lower case but for the I and the You which then give greater emphasis to the context. Well done and good luck in the contest! Debbie
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much Debbie for your positive feedback!
