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Comment from Paul McFarland
A nice Easter poem, Darla. The crucifixion story is one of my favorites in the Bible. Your devotion is obvious. In line nine, I think "are" should be "our".
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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A nice Easter poem, Darla. The crucifixion story is one of my favorites in the Bible. Your devotion is obvious. In line nine, I think "are" should be "our".
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Thanks!
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Very beautiful hommage and glory to God. The ultimate sacrifice at Calvary is painfully rendered here, with a powerful rhyme. I like the acrostic poems about Easter. They read like a hymn or a prayer.Really well done!!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Very beautiful hommage and glory to God. The ultimate sacrifice at Calvary is painfully rendered here, with a powerful rhyme. I like the acrostic poems about Easter. They read like a hymn or a prayer.Really well done!!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Thanks!