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Live the best you can.

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Comment from tempeste
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Ciao ! You have 11 votes.

I was not aware that you had signed up for the April contest...a poem a day!

I have read some of your poems and I like the themes: family, friendship, pets etc.

This weekend I will read more.

Take care!




 Comment Written 04-May-2023

reply by the author on 04-May-2023
    Thanks!
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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I have enjoyed this well-rhymed poem for its simplicity and its positive message of faith and goodwill.
Great picture!
My best wishes for the contest.
Mary

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

reply by the author on 03-May-2023
    Aren't we supposed to read all the poems for the contest?
reply by Mary Vigasin on 03-May-2023
    I am drowning now with reviews, imagine even if 10 writers take up the challenge? I have 41 in my box and most are writers with 4 or 5 each. So I have to be selective. I do not want to push others aside while I just read one writer.
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
    Ok
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
    My national poem of the month entry could use your help.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
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I loved your beautiful, straightforward, positive poem about a recipe for succeeding in life.
Good luck in the contest!
Keep writing,
Cindy Decker

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

reply by the author on 03-May-2023
    Thanks!
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
    Aren't we supposed to read all the poems in this contest?
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
    My national poem of the month entry could use your help.
Comment from Paul McFarland
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Darla, even though the meter is off, this poem reads quite smoothly. Good job. I think eventually you are going to get there. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2023

reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
    Thanks, I am really trying.
Comment from Teri7
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This is another great poem you have penned about children and life. You used very good descriptive words and very cute imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2023

reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
    You are welcome!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
    Except this is not about children.
reply by Teri7 on 24-Apr-2023
    Thank you! love and blessings, Teri
Comment from ~Dovey
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Hello!

I want to wish you all the best in this NaPoWriMo contest! Posting a poem a day for April is an admirable challenge!!

All the best, you are off to a good start.

Kim

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2023

reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
    Yes, I have to post two poems a day some days to have 30 poems by the deadline.
Comment from Michele Harber
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I couldn't agree more. Life is what we make it, and it's simply a matter of making the right choices. You have a lovely and optimistic philosophy, and I enjoyed the rhymes you used to express it.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2023

reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
    Thanks very much!
reply by Michele Harber on 23-Apr-2023
    You're welcome!