A Bitter Garden
Each flower grown from jealousy...29 total reviews
Comment from Janel Mock
I love every part of this. The image and colors! I love a good story that rhymes and is mysterious like this! I look forward to reading more each piece I read! Keep it coming! :)
~Janel
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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I love every part of this. The image and colors! I love a good story that rhymes and is mysterious like this! I look forward to reading more each piece I read! Keep it coming! :)
~Janel
Comment Written 01-May-2023
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Janel!!
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well written, this Wedding to be.
Not in Heaven as Evil as this can be.
Reminds me of My X named "Nancy"
Fancy Nancy fancy was all for romantic.
Yes but not for me but my billfold!
(You see?)
So I realize it wasn't so romantic in my time of panic and I decided to eliminate she!
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I still miss her to this day for 48 double D's never got in the way.
But of course all good things or bad things must come to an end?
This is a Halloween rhyming contest entry, Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this Jessica and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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This was well written, this Wedding to be.
Not in Heaven as Evil as this can be.
Reminds me of My X named "Nancy"
Fancy Nancy fancy was all for romantic.
Yes but not for me but my billfold!
(You see?)
So I realize it wasn't so romantic in my time of panic and I decided to eliminate she!
..
I still miss her to this day for 48 double D's never got in the way.
But of course all good things or bad things must come to an end?
This is a Halloween rhyming contest entry, Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this Jessica and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Awesome!!! Thank you so much!
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
I can imagine little flowers blossoming with tiny faces at the center. A very well written and haunting poem. I liked the meter and the playful wickedness it had within it.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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I can imagine little flowers blossoming with tiny faces at the center. A very well written and haunting poem. I liked the meter and the playful wickedness it had within it.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you SO much! Truly appreciate the feedback and stars!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Were you writing about my twin sister and me? Other than pleasing anyone of mine, she has always been in shadows hating me, looking to sabotage any precieved happiness I may have had. We are definitely not the commonly imagined image of what twins are.Excellent writing! Best wishes, :)) Alex
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Were you writing about my twin sister and me? Other than pleasing anyone of mine, she has always been in shadows hating me, looking to sabotage any precieved happiness I may have had. We are definitely not the commonly imagined image of what twins are.Excellent writing! Best wishes, :)) Alex
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Oh my goodness!!! I'm sorry for that. Thank you for your review!
Comment from pome lover
well, that is a wealth of rhyming poetry, telling an interesting story about an evil, jealous sister with special powers. I would hope, though it's not mentioned, that she gets her just desserts.
Congratulations on being recognized.
Katharine
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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well, that is a wealth of rhyming poetry, telling an interesting story about an evil, jealous sister with special powers. I would hope, though it's not mentioned, that she gets her just desserts.
Congratulations on being recognized.
Katharine
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Hahah Katharine, that's funny. Thanks for the awesome review!
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most welcome! :)
Comment from Calene
WOW! I love this so much!!! The whole time I was drawn into your world. The imagery was vivid, and the flow was fabulous! Everything rhymed very well, and the picture you added was perfect!! I think you'll do very well in this competition! Best of luck!
~Calene
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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WOW! I love this so much!!! The whole time I was drawn into your world. The imagery was vivid, and the flow was fabulous! Everything rhymed very well, and the picture you added was perfect!! I think you'll do very well in this competition! Best of luck!
~Calene
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from Lea Tonin1
I love the story you created for this contest all mixed up in a beautiful poem. What a package you have made really really nice I enjoyed it quite a bit!. That is an awesome picture too, love the colors! She didn't like her sister too much eh what a hag l o l.
I find your poem quite pleasing not only to look at but to read it grabbed me right off the hop so great work! I find no issues with grammar or with aesthetics in this poem. It's all a very well done in a great package.
Thank you for this I quite enjoyed I hope you have a great evening!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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I love the story you created for this contest all mixed up in a beautiful poem. What a package you have made really really nice I enjoyed it quite a bit!. That is an awesome picture too, love the colors! She didn't like her sister too much eh what a hag l o l.
I find your poem quite pleasing not only to look at but to read it grabbed me right off the hop so great work! I find no issues with grammar or with aesthetics in this poem. It's all a very well done in a great package.
Thank you for this I quite enjoyed I hope you have a great evening!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Lea!
Comment from nomi338
Although this poem is fictitious, there is so much factual basis for its content. Some people make themselves vicious monsters all because they fail to conquer their raging jealous natures. If I cannot have what you have, I will do something so evil, neither one of us will be happy.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Although this poem is fictitious, there is so much factual basis for its content. Some people make themselves vicious monsters all because they fail to conquer their raging jealous natures. If I cannot have what you have, I will do something so evil, neither one of us will be happy.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Spot on, Nomi. Thanks so much for your review!!
Comment from Raul1
A very creative and impressive story in a poem about a witch in Spring. I have enjoyed reading it. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poetry. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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A very creative and impressive story in a poem about a witch in Spring. I have enjoyed reading it. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poetry. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from royowen
This speaks of a nasty witch and her unsuspecting quarries, the bride and her intended that will fester like a blister, but I suspect that villains always lose in the end. Well done with interesting poem, no particular rhyme pattern, but it bopped along nicely, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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This speaks of a nasty witch and her unsuspecting quarries, the bride and her intended that will fester like a blister, but I suspect that villains always lose in the end. Well done with interesting poem, no particular rhyme pattern, but it bopped along nicely, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Thanks so much, Roy!
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