A Hairy Case
Who will win?22 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Hmm, this is a difficult one! Hmm, I would say, 'Get the shears out!' I remembered a women was reported for not having her hair washed for months, it was in the days of the Bouffant, when it was backcombed till it was a mile high. And it was full of bugs! I would say, cut it off!! YUK! I'm 100% on Adeline's side! Loved this, dear Yvonne. This was really fun to watch and participate in. Well done, my SATP!! :)) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Hmm, this is a difficult one! Hmm, I would say, 'Get the shears out!' I remembered a women was reported for not having her hair washed for months, it was in the days of the Bouffant, when it was backcombed till it was a mile high. And it was full of bugs! I would say, cut it off!! YUK! I'm 100% on Adeline's side! Loved this, dear Yvonne. This was really fun to watch and participate in. Well done, my SATP!! :)) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your gracious review. I've never done a script before, and I admit this one is pretty lame.
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No it's not! I thought it was great. I've never been a juror before. So this was such fun! Now how about a juicy murder for my next case? 😂 Truly, this was a fabulous script and a brilliant idea. xxx
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Thank you, dear sister. I feel better.
Comment from lyenochka
I'm so happy you're writing scripts, Yvonne! I think the formatting is easier if you actually chose the script category at the outset.
This is a humorous couple. I think they should see a marriage counselor not go to court. Perhaps she could cut his hair and he could do her makeup and then make up??
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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I'm so happy you're writing scripts, Yvonne! I think the formatting is easier if you actually chose the script category at the outset.
This is a humorous couple. I think they should see a marriage counselor not go to court. Perhaps she could cut his hair and he could do her makeup and then make up??
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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I know. I didn't realize about the script category until I'd already posted it through the club. Thanks for reviewing anyway. Next time, I'll know better.
