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Comment from Liz O'Neill
A teacher forever: "But here he helps so many, like a teacher still on call" This is a nice birthday tribute for Paul McFarland. This is nice because more people will wish him a happy birthday.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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A teacher forever: "But here he helps so many, like a teacher still on call" This is a nice birthday tribute for Paul McFarland. This is nice because more people will wish him a happy birthday.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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I thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem for Paul They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
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*** Big Smile***
Comment from Carol Clark2
A sweet Merry-Go-Rhyme poem for Paul's birthday. I don't think I've met him, so I will have to check his FS portfolio. It's nice of you to remember his special day. Thanks for the rules of this poetic form. I'm behind in reviewing, so I'll wish Paul a happy belated b-day. Carol
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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A sweet Merry-Go-Rhyme poem for Paul's birthday. I don't think I've met him, so I will have to check his FS portfolio. It's nice of you to remember his special day. Thanks for the rules of this poetic form. I'm behind in reviewing, so I'll wish Paul a happy belated b-day. Carol
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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I thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem for Paul They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
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You're welcome. Have a blessed week.
Comment from Dr. Nad
You continue to share with us that artistic talent of taking people, facts, dates, and events and turn them into a beautiful story that rhymes. If you're not careful sis, you'll have people claiming multiple birthdays per year with the expressed purpose of having you memorialize them in a way that only you can. God bless, embrace the love from above.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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You continue to share with us that artistic talent of taking people, facts, dates, and events and turn them into a beautiful story that rhymes. If you're not careful sis, you'll have people claiming multiple birthdays per year with the expressed purpose of having you memorialize them in a way that only you can. God bless, embrace the love from above.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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Spoken like a real brother. Lol... You are such a gem and I do appreciate you so much that if we weren't triplets, I'd be wishing I could write you a birthday poem. So looks to me like I will have to find another reason one of these days. We just need to find a time when we are not so busy when we can catch up a little and talk about old times...... and lol, maybe a few new ones too. Thanks again dear bro for your kindness always.
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L.O.L. You are most welcome sis. These days I come here so very very little and it is in and out. I'm still trying to learn how to earn some money writing, so pray for me. God bless sis.
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I am praying for you because as weird as it seems, every time we are in contact,I feel that sibling feeling more and more!
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Mom would be so happy the three of us found each other, wouldn't she? I can just see her right now with the joy on her face! L. O. L.
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Shoot, my mom, probably set it up with our mutual father?
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Uh Oh, I wasn't going to mention that, but you went there! L O L
Comment from LJbutterfly
You have written another great birthday poem for a well deserving writer and poet. I always enjoy reading his posts, and appreciate his reviews of mine. Thank you for your caring concern for our writing family.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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You have written another great birthday poem for a well deserving writer and poet. I always enjoy reading his posts, and appreciate his reviews of mine. Thank you for your caring concern for our writing family.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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Hi Lorraine. If you have already given me your birthdate please forgive me for asking again. It's just that I looked and I can't find it. I truly would like to know, as you and a few others have been so good to me with your wonderful reviews and friendship. I thank you for this one and all, as you just are so special. Thank you for that.
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Hi Dear Debi. Sorry it sometimes takes me a while to respond. No, you never asked for my birthday. It is in the middle of summer, July 13, and sometimes falls on Friday the 13th.
In my portfolio, there is a story called "Lies We Tell Children," where I tell my young daughter why Friday the 13th will never be bad luck for me or her. Thanks for asking.
Blessings, Lorraine
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On Lorraine, first of all thank you for the date and I loved the story too!
Comment from pome lover
For some reason, I feel like I've already responded to this one, Debi, but it's not here, so I guess not.
It is such a nice poem and I'm sure that he really appreciated it.
Congrats on All Time Best and for being recognized.
Katharine
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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For some reason, I feel like I've already responded to this one, Debi, but it's not here, so I guess not.
It is such a nice poem and I'm sure that he really appreciated it.
Congrats on All Time Best and for being recognized.
Katharine
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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I thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem for Paul They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thanks for sharing the image, notes, and poem, Debi.
-You did a good job with the birthday poem for Paul.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A good introduction to him and his career, and
sharing about his book and what you learned from that.
-You also show how he is a good friend here on FanStory,
and can even relate to your Minn. winters!
-A very good closing couplet for his birthday.
-I will be sharing a birthday message for him.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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-Thanks for sharing the image, notes, and poem, Debi.
-You did a good job with the birthday poem for Paul.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A good introduction to him and his career, and
sharing about his book and what you learned from that.
-You also show how he is a good friend here on FanStory,
and can even relate to your Minn. winters!
-A very good closing couplet for his birthday.
-I will be sharing a birthday message for him.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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I thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem for Paul They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
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You are very welcome, Debi.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
What a charming manner to wish someone happy birthday!!! The rhyming is fabulous and the rhyming perfect. The sincerity with which you write transpires in your work!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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What a charming manner to wish someone happy birthday!!! The rhyming is fabulous and the rhyming perfect. The sincerity with which you write transpires in your work!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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I thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem for Paul They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from gudbjorg
Well, this certainly fills the criteria of being a fun poem and having a 'feeling of swing in the rhyme'! I really enjoyed it and its humour! The inspiration behind it and the playful way in which the subject is approached shows why Debi is such an accomplished poet!
Thank you for brightening my day! Guðbjörg
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Well, this certainly fills the criteria of being a fun poem and having a 'feeling of swing in the rhyme'! I really enjoyed it and its humour! The inspiration behind it and the playful way in which the subject is approached shows why Debi is such an accomplished poet!
Thank you for brightening my day! Guðbjörg
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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I thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem for Paul They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a very nice birthday poem and it rhymes very well. I hope Paul has a happy birthday, too. Congratulations on getting published, Paul! I can't recall if I've seen his name, I'm still getting familiar. He looks like a nice man and I'm sure he'll love this poem that you wrote. Very nice! :))
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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This is a very nice birthday poem and it rhymes very well. I hope Paul has a happy birthday, too. Congratulations on getting published, Paul! I can't recall if I've seen his name, I'm still getting familiar. He looks like a nice man and I'm sure he'll love this poem that you wrote. Very nice! :))
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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Alexandra, you sweetheart. Thank you for the kind words and the awesome stars. I appreciate you so much for this lovely review package! Hugs! Debi
Comment from Teri7
Debi, This is a very sweet and well written birthday poem for Paul. You used great descriptive words with a very nice picture of Paul. Thank you for letting us know my friend. I wish Paul a very happy and blessed birthday! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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Debi, This is a very sweet and well written birthday poem for Paul. You used great descriptive words with a very nice picture of Paul. Thank you for letting us know my friend. I wish Paul a very happy and blessed birthday! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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Teri, you sweetheart. Thank you for the kind words and the awesome stars. I appreciate you so much for this lovely review package! Hugs! Debi
