Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

love crunching leaves!

good autumn haiku

a suggestion, if i may...
- don't use capitols on every line
- and maybe a dash after the first line for a slight pause

Love autumn breezes -
brown leaves crackling at our feet
before winter snows

just a couple thoughts

thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023

Thanks for the read and feedback. Like your suggestions.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I have been reading many spring poems and then yours turns up with autumn breezes with the threat of winter on the horizon, a fine post for the contest, but I am glad spring is approaching, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023

Me too. But my favorite time is fall. Love the changing colors. However, don't care a whole lot for the cold rain. Thanks for the read and feedback.xxx