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Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Engineering"NaPoWriMo 2023
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We are lucky to live in a world full of gadgets to help us navigate life and give us a rest from hard work on occasions. Everything is computerised or automated these days. A fine Acrostic Alicia, well worded with carefully chosen first words to make this post magical, love Dolly x
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We are lucky to live in a world full of gadgets to help us navigate life and give us a rest from hard work on occasions. Everything is computerised or automated these days. A fine Acrostic Alicia, well worded with carefully chosen first words to make this post magical, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
Comment from lyenochka
This made me appreciate the efforts of engineers those "Geek geniuses who design Incredible practical products." Enjoyed your acrostic poem with its well worded summary "Great ideas that keep people eager about life."
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This made me appreciate the efforts of engineers those "Geek geniuses who design Incredible practical products." Enjoyed your acrostic poem with its well worded summary "Great ideas that keep people eager about life."
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
Comment from Gina Schneller
Good Morning! First of all, I love the picture you chose! My favorite line in your poem was, "Great ideas that keep people eager about life." It really is the great ideas in life that give us motivation. ~ Thank you for sharing your writing with us all! ~ Best of luck in your writing journey! :)
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Good Morning! First of all, I love the picture you chose! My favorite line in your poem was, "Great ideas that keep people eager about life." It really is the great ideas in life that give us motivation. ~ Thank you for sharing your writing with us all! ~ Best of luck in your writing journey! :)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, ENGINEERING, presented with the proper vertical formatting, allows that life and engineering evolve together as people find new ways to satisfy their utilitarian needs.
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This acrostic poem, ENGINEERING, presented with the proper vertical formatting, allows that life and engineering evolve together as people find new ways to satisfy their utilitarian needs.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Nicely done! Clever! The words were carefully chosen and fit into a fast timing I think, that matches the pace of engineering. That is clever. Good work! :))
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Nicely done! Clever! The words were carefully chosen and fit into a fast timing I think, that matches the pace of engineering. That is clever. Good work! :))
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is very clever and I enjoyed the skill contained in mastering this verse form. I'm certainly not an engineer but the facts sounded pretty impressive to me. I particularly liked: "Evolution transpires evolving niche audiences." Great fun. Well done, Debbie
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This is very clever and I enjoyed the skill contained in mastering this verse form. I'm certainly not an engineer but the facts sounded pretty impressive to me. I particularly liked: "Evolution transpires evolving niche audiences." Great fun. Well done, Debbie
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
