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Comment from Sally Law
Aw, mystery poet, this has made me happy just by reading this! What a delightful entry for the contest and infectiously fun! I'm dancing and singing with the bear!! Mission accomplished: Sally Soooooo Happy!
I think we have a runaway winner here for the contest. My vote for sure!
Sending you my best today as always, a big bear hug too with my best wishes for the contest.
Sally Law :)))))
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Aw, mystery poet, this has made me happy just by reading this! What a delightful entry for the contest and infectiously fun! I'm dancing and singing with the bear!! Mission accomplished: Sally Soooooo Happy!
I think we have a runaway winner here for the contest. My vote for sure!
Sending you my best today as always, a big bear hug too with my best wishes for the contest.
Sally Law :)))))
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Sally, I sure appreciate all of your kind words for my silly happy poem. Thank you so very much my dear friend.
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Most welcome! Best wishes in the contest! Sal :)))
Comment from Ricky1024
This is "Happy Poem"
Contest Entry rich in Theme design and Imagery. It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues. Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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This is "Happy Poem"
Contest Entry rich in Theme design and Imagery. It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues. Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Rick, I sure appreciate all of your kind words for my silly happy poem. Thank you so very much my dear friend.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your words made me happy here as I enjoyed your soulful happiness and your upbeat rhymes, I wish you luck with the contest, I am still laughing at the picture, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Your words made me happy here as I enjoyed your soulful happiness and your upbeat rhymes, I wish you luck with the contest, I am still laughing at the picture, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Dolly, I sure appreciate all of your kind words for my silly happy poem. Thank you so very much my dear friend.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I love the dancing bear and the whole essence of this happy verse which completely fills the brief as far as the subject matter is concerned. It is light, fun, different and tells a great story rounding off the tale with a perfect conclusion. There is some awkwardness in fluency at times but not enough to detract from what I consider to be an excellent presentation. Good luck, Debbie
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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I love the dancing bear and the whole essence of this happy verse which completely fills the brief as far as the subject matter is concerned. It is light, fun, different and tells a great story rounding off the tale with a perfect conclusion. There is some awkwardness in fluency at times but not enough to detract from what I consider to be an excellent presentation. Good luck, Debbie
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Debbbie, I sure appreciate all of your kind words for my silly happy poem. Thank you so very much my dear friend.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Everybody in the world needs to see this poem and happy dance. I have a happiness inside also that is steady. I'm very empathetic, and can feel down about a situation but my happiness is apart from day to day events. I like the rhyming and the words. This is cute and authentic too. Good work and good luck! :))
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Everybody in the world needs to see this poem and happy dance. I have a happiness inside also that is steady. I'm very empathetic, and can feel down about a situation but my happiness is apart from day to day events. I like the rhyming and the words. This is cute and authentic too. Good work and good luck! :))
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Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Alex, I sure appreciate all of your kind words for my silly happy poem. Thank you so very much my dear friend.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
L o l your third stanza so made me chuckle! I really like the dancing bears hilarious!
Nice work on this poem. You have the instructions correct by your dancing bear and the happy lines so great job!
I see no issues with spelling punctuation grammar or sentence structure I also think it's very aesthetically pleasing and very well done! So thank you for your submission and wish you the best of luck!
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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L o l your third stanza so made me chuckle! I really like the dancing bears hilarious!
Nice work on this poem. You have the instructions correct by your dancing bear and the happy lines so great job!
I see no issues with spelling punctuation grammar or sentence structure I also think it's very aesthetically pleasing and very well done! So thank you for your submission and wish you the best of luck!
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Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Lea, I sure appreciate all of your kind words for my silly happy poem. Thank you so very much my dear friend.
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