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Comment from Wendy G
A fun poem about being happy, from a different perspective. The metre is lively and flows well, and the rhymes are well made. Sending best wishes for your poem in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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A fun poem about being happy, from a different perspective. The metre is lively and flows well, and the rhymes are well made. Sending best wishes for your poem in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Thank you Wendy I appreciate the kind words for my poem.
Comment from DeboraDyess
Oh, do I understand the momma bear situation! Happy dancing is far better.
I love the flow and rhyme, the happy feeling the poem leaves in your mind and heart. I loved it all! Well done. I hope you win the contest!
Blessings,
Deb
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Oh, do I understand the momma bear situation! Happy dancing is far better.
I love the flow and rhyme, the happy feeling the poem leaves in your mind and heart. I loved it all! Well done. I hope you win the contest!
Blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Oh Deb, I just love a fellow mama bear, but a happy bear means that mama's family is safe from the bullies of the world. And nothing makes us happier. It truly takes one to know one. You my sweet friend completely understood my poem! Thanks for the lovely stars too!
Comment from sunnilicious
That animated artwork is cool. And you, I am happy for you. Wishing you every bit of happiness in the world. You're poem came out great. Good visual imagery and storytelling. Excellent work :)
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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That animated artwork is cool. And you, I am happy for you. Wishing you every bit of happiness in the world. You're poem came out great. Good visual imagery and storytelling. Excellent work :)
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Hey Sunni, thank you so much for such kind and sweet words for my happy dance. So appreciated my friend.
Comment from Brandon Clark
Very well done! The image is funny and the poem itself is witty and the self-deprecation about the poem itself was clever. Truly enjoyed it and have seen the bear a few times from somebody close and always hope for a long hibernation along with those who were mauled...lol.
Best of luck in the contest...definitely crafted a worthy contender with this!
Brandon
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Very well done! The image is funny and the poem itself is witty and the self-deprecation about the poem itself was clever. Truly enjoyed it and have seen the bear a few times from somebody close and always hope for a long hibernation along with those who were mauled...lol.
Best of luck in the contest...definitely crafted a worthy contender with this!
Brandon
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Brandon, I thank you so much for such kind and fun words for my happy dance. So appreciated my friend.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi,
This is a cute poem accompanied by a funny video. It does show how happy you are to possibly think you can dance like the bear. Laughter
is the best thing to share.
Good luck in the prompt
Keep writing and stay healthly
Joan
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Hi,
This is a cute poem accompanied by a funny video. It does show how happy you are to possibly think you can dance like the bear. Laughter
is the best thing to share.
Good luck in the prompt
Keep writing and stay healthly
Joan
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Dearest Joan, I thank you so much for such kind and sweet words for my happy dance. So appreciated my friend.
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You are most kindly welcome.
Joan
Comment from shelley kaye
what a happy, bubbly little rhyme with a very perky dancing bear lol
smooth flow and fun word choices
loved these two lines...
The only time I scurry
Looking for the perfect rhyme
:-)
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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what a happy, bubbly little rhyme with a very perky dancing bear lol
smooth flow and fun word choices
loved these two lines...
The only time I scurry
Looking for the perfect rhyme
:-)
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Thank you Shelley, and I don't think I can express how much I appreciated your little gift back to me. First of all, I had forgotten about that song and how much I love it. How could you not be happy after listening to that. But then I stayed for more of the show, and enjoyed Karolina's final concert with her talented peers. And if that wasn't enough, (and I never take the time to listen to everything) but just had to watch Simon Crowell from AGT to judge that awesome choir director. So I went from happy go lucky, touched by these children to blessed by this Pastor's choir. Wow and thank you so much!!!
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love simon!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent poem entry for the Happy Poems writing prompt contest.
The picture reminds me of a silly movie about a bear on covain. LoL
The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Excellent poem entry for the Happy Poems writing prompt contest.
The picture reminds me of a silly movie about a bear on covain. LoL
The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Dearest Gypsey, I thank you so much for such kind and sweet words for my happy dance. So appreciated my friend.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, My Happy Dance, has an undeniably terrific, animated bear image that makes me happy even without reading your poem. Your poem completes the enjoyment.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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This poem, My Happy Dance, has an undeniably terrific, animated bear image that makes me happy even without reading your poem. Your poem completes the enjoyment.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Bill, I thank you so much for such kind and sweet words for my happy dance. So appreciated my friend.
Comment from nomi338
One of the most dangerous individuals on Planet Earth is a mammal protecting their young. Now I know there are some who pretty much abandon their young after their birth, but I also know that most are very fierce in their protection of their young. believe me, you do not want to threaten or endanger the young of most mammals.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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One of the most dangerous individuals on Planet Earth is a mammal protecting their young. Now I know there are some who pretty much abandon their young after their birth, but I also know that most are very fierce in their protection of their young. believe me, you do not want to threaten or endanger the young of most mammals.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Dearest Nomi, I thank you so much for such kind and sweet words for my happy dance. So appreciated my friend.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This musical video is so happy. It would make anyone do the happy dance. Don't worry, be happy. We should start the day with this music. Your poem is wonderful written.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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This musical video is so happy. It would make anyone do the happy dance. Don't worry, be happy. We should start the day with this music. Your poem is wonderful written.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Dearest Rosemary, I thank you so much for such kind and sweet words for my happy dance. And also for your gracious six stars. So appreciated my friend.
