Ode to lancellot
He marches to his own unique beat10 total reviews
Comment from Terry Broxson
Jim, congratulations on winning the Ode Poetry contest. The only thing missing from your fun, creative writing is a review from Sir Lancellot himself...giving you a four rating with a comment that it needs work. I don't think it needs work, but you know he would. Terry.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Jim, congratulations on winning the Ode Poetry contest. The only thing missing from your fun, creative writing is a review from Sir Lancellot himself...giving you a four rating with a comment that it needs work. I don't think it needs work, but you know he would. Terry.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Ha-ha. You're right! Thanks for your good review, Terry.
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LOL, Jim, we are laughing with him, not at him...well done.
Comment from Julie Lau
Congratulations and onya, Jim! I'm sure lancellot would be chuffed too. Did I tell you he liked my Lancelot poem? He thought it was very funny. And it got on the Welcome page!! (I thought it would be blocked). Ditto Bad Moves. Julie :)
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Congratulations and onya, Jim! I'm sure lancellot would be chuffed too. Did I tell you he liked my Lancelot poem? He thought it was very funny. And it got on the Welcome page!! (I thought it would be blocked). Ditto Bad Moves. Julie :)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thanks, Julie. So glad he enjoyed your poem. I figured he would!
Comment from Mike Grimes
Excellent! Great meter and rhyme, and I love the fact that it's about a fellow writer. I will definitely be reading more of your writing, and I'll be looking into his as well! I'm a sucker for lewd humor. Congratulations on your win, and I truly enjoyed your work!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Excellent! Great meter and rhyme, and I love the fact that it's about a fellow writer. I will definitely be reading more of your writing, and I'll be looking into his as well! I'm a sucker for lewd humor. Congratulations on your win, and I truly enjoyed your work!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thanks very much, Mike, for the great review and the 6 stars. I think you'll enjoy his work.
Comment from K.I. Betancur
As a newcomer to FanStory who had only read lance's work today, I whole-heartedly appreciated reading this! Definitely makes me want to keep an eye out for his works.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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As a newcomer to FanStory who had only read lance's work today, I whole-heartedly appreciated reading this! Definitely makes me want to keep an eye out for his works.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Some of it is rather shocking, but definitely humorous. Welcome to FanStory, BTW.
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Thank you!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I enjoyed this verse which flows with great rhythm, originality and self-deprecating fun. The rhyming is well-done and I love the last paragraph that disputes any criticism with a strong self-affirming "To be." Well done! Best wishes, Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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I enjoyed this verse which flows with great rhythm, originality and self-deprecating fun. The rhyming is well-done and I love the last paragraph that disputes any criticism with a strong self-affirming "To be." Well done! Best wishes, Debbie
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thanks very much for this great review, Debbie.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a good ode entry. It rhymes well and allows the reader an insight - paying tribute to Lancelot - a fellow FanStorian. It takes all sorts to make the world go round, characters to a book, ingredients to food - thank goodness there is rough to allow the appreciation of smooth. I enjoyed this ode. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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This is a good ode entry. It rhymes well and allows the reader an insight - paying tribute to Lancelot - a fellow FanStorian. It takes all sorts to make the world go round, characters to a book, ingredients to food - thank goodness there is rough to allow the appreciation of smooth. I enjoyed this ode. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thanks very much for this great review.
Comment from Gloria ....
Well this is great! Lancellot is all you have said, and I'll bet he really loves this ode to him.
Just one typo in the subtitle:
He marches to his own uniqe (unique) beat
Wishing you much luck with the voters.
Gloria
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Well this is great! Lancellot is all you have said, and I'll bet he really loves this ode to him.
Just one typo in the subtitle:
He marches to his own uniqe (unique) beat
Wishing you much luck with the voters.
Gloria
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thanks for this good review, Gloria, and for finding that typo.
Comment from Nicki Nance
You might have just recruited a new fan for Sir Lance. Using another Fanstorian as the object of your ode i was a brilliant choice. Your comical message was embedded in such a reverent form. I tend to run a little crude myself, but I restrain myself in this venue. I got a little vicarious thrill from your ode.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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You might have just recruited a new fan for Sir Lance. Using another Fanstorian as the object of your ode i was a brilliant choice. Your comical message was embedded in such a reverent form. I tend to run a little crude myself, but I restrain myself in this venue. I got a little vicarious thrill from your ode.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Thanks very much, Nicki for the review and the 6 stars. If you like crude, you'll find a kindred spirit in lancellot.
Comment from jessizero
He isn't afraid to share anything. I have read works of his that are definitely worth six stars. His reviews are always helpful, too. Thank you for sharing this ode to lancellot, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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He isn't afraid to share anything. I have read works of his that are definitely worth six stars. His reviews are always helpful, too. Thank you for sharing this ode to lancellot, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from royowen
He's a smart cookie, very cynical however, but he's honest, but honesty is not truth, it's the truth as any of us is only capable of. However, he us perceptive concerning human nature, I somehow doubt humans can overcome their personal bias. But this is so eloquently put, and the second post about this interesting character, beautifully eloquent, smooth and well rhymed, blessing, Roy
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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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He's a smart cookie, very cynical however, but he's honest, but honesty is not truth, it's the truth as any of us is only capable of. However, he us perceptive concerning human nature, I somehow doubt humans can overcome their personal bias. But this is so eloquently put, and the second post about this interesting character, beautifully eloquent, smooth and well rhymed, blessing, Roy
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate your comments.
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Most welcome