Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet, you now have 3 votes!

Yes, God created a magnificent planet for us to live on, shame we don't take care of it.

Fauna and flora are wondrous and now that we are in Spring everything is so green and the air is full of sweet scents.

A lovely poem that praises God's masterpiece; Earth.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023

Thanks!

reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023

I am in a happy poem contest.

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

ooh a double rainbow! COOL!

oh since cali has been getting rain again... everything is so green and colourful!
so nice to look at... though my sinuses don't like it much lol

beautiful poem with wonderful imagery

thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest


shelley :)

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023

Thank you!!!

Comment from RodG

Good

I applaud your praising Earth for all its beauties. There is so much that Nature provides that we should pay tribute to. My major criticism is that you dart around too much. May I suggest starting with a panorama shot of the mountains and skies and moving in for close-ups of the specific creatures that give you delight.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023

My poem is excellent, thanks very much!