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Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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This is a nicely written poem/tribute. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. A nice presentation as well. Very nicely done as always Debi. Happy Birthday wishes to Terry.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
    Hi Joanne, i have missed you lately . I thank you for the lovely review of our Terry's poem. He really is the greatest and I am especially happy that we have him. Thanks for your kind words, my dear friend.
    Debi
reply by Joanne Gill-Maddick on 13-Apr-2023
    I work full time debi don?t get a lot of time here and been having a lot of problems with a tooth had it taken out and been in a lot of pain as it turns out there?s a root left in my gum. Waiting to get it taken out. I enjoy your poems 🙂
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written, heart felt poem you have penned to celebrate Terry Broxson's birthday. You used very good words and very lovely picture. love and blessings and Happy Birthday to Terry!!!

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
    Hi Teri, I thank you for the lovely review of our Terry's poem. He really is the greatest and I am especially happy that we have him. Thanks for your kind words, my dear friend.
Comment from Julie Lau
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That's a great birthday gift to a friend, their very own birthday poem. I have done a similarly personal thing with a painting, and it's always been greatly appreciated. Well, they're more like cartoons really, but very personal. Well done, and I like your rhyming pattern too. Julie L x

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
    Thanks Julie, I would love to put you on my list if you want to share your birthday. I also would love to see your art. That is awesome that you have the talent. Thanks again for the kind words.
reply by Julie Lau on 12-Apr-2023
    Thank you Debi. Sept 10th. If you go into my portfolio, 2 images are mine: see Marooned on Ice, and The Stud Groom. Jx
reply by Julie Lau on 12-Apr-2023
    Also High Kicks, the best one.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
    Thanks Julie, I will check out your art as soon as I am done here. And thanks for your birthday.
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
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A great birthday present and I'm sure much appreciated by the recipient!
This is a lovely tribute to receive. It is enough to make you forget that another year has passed!

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
    Sara,
    , I thank you for the lovely review of our Terry's poem. He really is the greatest and I am especially happy that we have him. Thanks for your kind words, my dear friend.
    Debi
Comment from Annmuma
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Top of the line subject matter, love the picture and certainly you have caught Terry's personality in your words. Excellent post. If I could review your poetry style, etc, I would do so -- but my skills in poetry are near nil. I just know if I like it -- I like it. ann

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
    Thanks Ann, I appreciate your kind words.
reply by Annmuma on 13-Apr-2023
    Debi - Terry alerted me to my having given your post a 4 star rating!!!!! That was certainly unintentional. Just this morning, another fanstorian asked me why I had given her 4 stars!!! Another error. I don't know what happened yesterday, but apparently I was not completely focused my rating when I was doing my review. My apologies. Rating has been updated. Should I ever do that again with your posts, please let me know. My 4 ratings are rare because I tend not to rate something I consider sub-par. When I do give a 4, I try to always explain where I am coming from. Yesterday's mistakes are new for me. ann
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
    I just got done reading your pm to me, and thank you again for your respect and kindness. For as little as I know of you, I think so highly of you. Thanks again my friend.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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That's a very cute birthday poem for your friend. Your rhymed flow well and you use good imagery. Your photo compliments your words very well, too Great work! :))

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
    Hi Alex, I thank you for the lovely review of our Terry's poem. He really is the greatest and I am especially happy that we have him. Thanks for your kind words, my dear friend.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Excellent Milestone post and a truly heartfelt Birthday dedication to a very dear friend. The detail and interest contained in such a well-rhymed and fun verse conveys to the reader both a wonderful friendship and an impressive background to this special man. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Debbie

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
    Hi Debbie, I thank you for the lovely review of our Terry's poem. He really is the greatest and I am especially happy that we have him. Thanks for your kind words, my dear friend.
Comment from Heather Knight
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Hello Debi,
This is an interesting poetic form. Have you made it up yourself?
I'm not sure I know Terry. Is he on Fanstory?
I have enjoyed reading this and listening to the video as well.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
    Heather, I thank you for the lovely review of our Terry's poem. He really is the greatest and I am especially happy that we have him.
    Thanks for your kind words, my dear friend. Debi
    And if you could send your birthdate I would sure appreciate it. I am asking those that I know the best and closest to, as it would be impossible to do everyone.
Comment from pome lover
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How lovely, Debi.
I know he was pleased. Does he live where you do? I"m guessing he does.
Nice to know, now, what he looks like.
I believe you are a happy, giving person. Got lots of stars wracked up :)
Good for you. It is a great poem, saying what you wanted to say in good meter and rhyme.
Katharine

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
    Hi Katharine, I thank you for your kind comments about Terry?s birthday poem. Actually Terry lives in Texas and I live in Minnesota and have never met. He's just been such a good guy and helped and encouraged me to write more prose. I'm so thankful for all of you friends here.
reply by pome lover on 12-Apr-2023
    well,how did you get that picture?
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
    That was actually a picture of his brother, Zoe and himself that he used for a post long ago. So I just cropped his brother out and that's how I got that.
reply by pome lover on 12-Apr-2023
    thanks
Comment from Carol Clark2
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A cute and snappy birthday tribute for Terry, and a milestone post as well! Congrats on 200 posts! You used good rhymes, and included a nice picture. Blessings, and happy birthday to Terry!

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
    Thank you Carol for the lovely review of our Terry's poem. He really is the greatest and I am especially happy that we have him, just as I am for you.
    Thanks for your kind words, my dear friend. Debi