Reflections
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Comment from kiwisteveh
Yes, monkeys are amazing, aren't they, with their agility and cheeky energy. I have been lucky enough to observe them in the wild a few times in Singapore and Malaysia.
Nice entry for this contest. Good luck.
Steve
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Yes, monkeys are amazing, aren't they, with their agility and cheeky energy. I have been lucky enough to observe them in the wild a few times in Singapore and Malaysia.
Nice entry for this contest. Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These monkeys are fascinating to watch, they are so active and clever swinging from tree to tree and you brought their activity to life here Jane, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
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These monkeys are fascinating to watch, they are so active and clever swinging from tree to tree and you brought their activity to life here Jane, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
Comment from Cherish Adams
Monkeys are enchanting and inspirational. This is a vivid three line depiction that conjures a scene in my head. Love that kind of imagery. Well done.
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Monkeys are enchanting and inspirational. This is a vivid three line depiction that conjures a scene in my head. Love that kind of imagery. Well done.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
Comment from Kayliegh
Oh wow, great job with this poem! You did an amazing job, especially considering the rather difficult prompt, and I found this to be quite the interesting idea! However I dislike the dark green background color, but other than that good job! Best of luck to you in the contest! Now, quick but important thing, your soul.
Now I'd like you to think briefly of the most beautiful painting you've ever seen.
Do you look at that and think the painting created itself? No of course not. The painting means there must be a painter. Now think of every sunrise, sunset, mountain, blade of grass, your friends, family, pets, every cell in your being. You don't really honk that all created itself do you? Of course not, there has to be a God to create that creation.
And no matter how good of a person you think you are, you have sinned against that God. But there is still hope for you, that's why Jesus died on the cross for you, yes you. Repent of your sins and trust in Jesus and he will replace your heart of stone for a heart of flesh. I'm not exactly the height of knowledge on the topic, so I would highly recommend that for more information you go to Living Waters on YouTube, please just watch one video and you won't regret it. Alright have a nice day, God bless.
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Oh wow, great job with this poem! You did an amazing job, especially considering the rather difficult prompt, and I found this to be quite the interesting idea! However I dislike the dark green background color, but other than that good job! Best of luck to you in the contest! Now, quick but important thing, your soul.
Now I'd like you to think briefly of the most beautiful painting you've ever seen.
Do you look at that and think the painting created itself? No of course not. The painting means there must be a painter. Now think of every sunrise, sunset, mountain, blade of grass, your friends, family, pets, every cell in your being. You don't really honk that all created itself do you? Of course not, there has to be a God to create that creation.
And no matter how good of a person you think you are, you have sinned against that God. But there is still hope for you, that's why Jesus died on the cross for you, yes you. Repent of your sins and trust in Jesus and he will replace your heart of stone for a heart of flesh. I'm not exactly the height of knowledge on the topic, so I would highly recommend that for more information you go to Living Waters on YouTube, please just watch one video and you won't regret it. Alright have a nice day, God bless.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
