Within the Bone
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "In Two Minds"A tale of love, magic, and revenge.
2 total reviews
Comment from Mario PIERRE
I have not read other chapters, so I'm a bit new to the story, but I can say that the writing is clear and the dialogue crisp. The characters have weight and there is a real plot in the chapter.
I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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I have not read other chapters, so I'm a bit new to the story, but I can say that the writing is clear and the dialogue crisp. The characters have weight and there is a real plot in the chapter.
I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it and I apologize for the delay in response. I know it can be confusing to come in the middle of the story, so I appreciate the willingness to still give it a read. I hope you have a great day!
Comment from Ricky1024
This Story was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day!
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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This Story was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day!
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it and I apologize for the delay in response. Have a wonderful day!
