Laugh And Live
Learn to forgive.3 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
I wish I had six stars to give for this very well written Essence poem, but I am all out. You used very good and very true words. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
  |
I wish I had six stars to give for this very well written Essence poem, but I am all out. You used very good and very true words. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 07-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
-
Thanks very much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have read a few of these and yours is well rhymed with a fine sentiment as we must admit when we are wrong and be strong and brave to deal with the consequences, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
|
I have read a few of these and yours is well rhymed with a fine sentiment as we must admit when we are wrong and be strong and brave to deal with the consequences, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
-
Thanks!
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Very nice and good reference to the inside poem. I love the picture you chose, a very good selection that goes great with your palm and subject matter.
And obviously very talented hand and heart of a poet wrote this ode which I find sweet and delightful..
I see no issues grammatically with your poem. I find it aesthetically pleasing and wouldn't know any way to make it better than it already. Is you can't get much better than grade anyway!
I thank you for your submission and look forward to your next one. I hope you have a great evening!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
|
Very nice and good reference to the inside poem. I love the picture you chose, a very good selection that goes great with your palm and subject matter.
And obviously very talented hand and heart of a poet wrote this ode which I find sweet and delightful..
I see no issues grammatically with your poem. I find it aesthetically pleasing and wouldn't know any way to make it better than it already. Is you can't get much better than grade anyway!
I thank you for your submission and look forward to your next one. I hope you have a great evening!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
-
Thanks so much for your kind review. I am busy crocheting an afghan.
-
Nice!
-
Nice!
-
Nice!
-
Yes
