Looking for Positive in Winter
Eight more inches last week ~ Another blizzard on the way26 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
great poem - the winter snow out west was a blessing but too much at once the drought may be easing a bit but they say they need a few more winters like that to say it is over. the west is still running low on water....
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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great poem - the winter snow out west was a blessing but too much at once the drought may be easing a bit but they say they need a few more winters like that to say it is over. the west is still running low on water....
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
Thank you so much for your kind review and words for this poem about our seemingly endless winters. It really could be worst. Lol
Comment from Sally Law
Wonderful poem in this very difficult form, mystery poetry, and the internal and external rhyme flow so well with your message.
It certainly has been a difficult winter that has continued into the spring.
A six for your hard work on this one, and my very best in the upcoming contest. Sending some Florida sunshine too!!
Sally Law :)) XOs
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Wonderful poem in this very difficult form, mystery poetry, and the internal and external rhyme flow so well with your message.
It certainly has been a difficult winter that has continued into the spring.
A six for your hard work on this one, and my very best in the upcoming contest. Sending some Florida sunshine too!!
Sally Law :)) XOs
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, I don't know how people survive the winter in these snowy states, or how they get function and get around on a day-to-day basis.
Enough is enough already--no more snow.
Your poem reads and flows well and has good internal rhyming--
Lord/hoard.
Well-chosen photo. I do love that big, wide blue sky, but you can keep the snow. Sharing is not caring, in this case. Lol.
A timely poem. Sorry about the upcoming flooding. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Hello author, I don't know how people survive the winter in these snowy states, or how they get function and get around on a day-to-day basis.
Enough is enough already--no more snow.
Your poem reads and flows well and has good internal rhyming--
Lord/hoard.
Well-chosen photo. I do love that big, wide blue sky, but you can keep the snow. Sharing is not caring, in this case. Lol.
A timely poem. Sorry about the upcoming flooding. LateBloomer
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
Thank you so much for your kind review and words for this poem about our seemingly endless winters. It really could be worst. Lol
Comment from GWHARGIS
I know you aren't going to understand this but I prayed for snow this winter. It is a rarity here. I liked how you said hoard the snow. It does seem like certain areas get more snow than they can handle. We have hurricanes. We all have our battles. Gretchen
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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I know you aren't going to understand this but I prayed for snow this winter. It is a rarity here. I liked how you said hoard the snow. It does seem like certain areas get more snow than they can handle. We have hurricanes. We all have our battles. Gretchen
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
Thank you so much for your kind review and words for this poem about our seemingly endless winters. It really could be worst. Lol
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thanks for sharing the photo and notes.
-I am sorry you are having all this snow and a blizzard.
-Hope it ends soon.
-You have a good essence poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and the required rhyme.
-I like your prayer, asking Him why you must
have to experience all of this snow.
-Hope your prayers are answered, and you win the contest.
-Good luck!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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-Thanks for sharing the photo and notes.
-I am sorry you are having all this snow and a blizzard.
-Hope it ends soon.
-You have a good essence poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and the required rhyme.
-I like your prayer, asking Him why you must
have to experience all of this snow.
-Hope your prayers are answered, and you win the contest.
-Good luck!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
Thank you so much for your kind review and words for this poem about our seemingly endless winters. It really could be worst. Lol
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You are very welcome, Debi, and you have probably experienced worse, as many of us have.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry was well done, Mystery Author.
The picture (yours?) plus your words paired perfectly.
Awesome job with the requirements of the prompt. I
liked the end rhymes and the internal rhymes. I could
hear the angst in your plea to the Lord.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Your contest entry was well done, Mystery Author.
The picture (yours?) plus your words paired perfectly.
Awesome job with the requirements of the prompt. I
liked the end rhymes and the internal rhymes. I could
hear the angst in your plea to the Lord.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
Thank you so much for your kind review and words for this poem about our seemingly endless winters. It really could be worst. Lol
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, my friend this is a lovely poem on the essence of winter. This snow is crazy this season. I had snow squalls here in New York the other day. This morning it was 70° and hot. And right now there's thunderstorms. Very bipolar weatherð?¤£ð???ð??»â??â??ï¸?
-kerry
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Hello there, my friend this is a lovely poem on the essence of winter. This snow is crazy this season. I had snow squalls here in New York the other day. This morning it was 70° and hot. And right now there's thunderstorms. Very bipolar weatherð?¤£ð???ð??»â??â??ï¸?
-kerry
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
Thank you so much for your kind review and words for this poem about our seemingly endless winters. It really could be worst. Lol
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You're welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Weather is getting more unpredictable every day. Global warming is real. In California we had tons of rain and floods. This week we had strong winds. Usually it's warm and sunny in Los Angeles.
Good job.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Weather is getting more unpredictable every day. Global warming is real. In California we had tons of rain and floods. This week we had strong winds. Usually it's warm and sunny in Los Angeles.
Good job.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
Thank you so much for your kind review and words for this poem about our seemingly endless winters. It really could be worst. Lol
Comment from kahpot
This is very well thought out as it has been quite an extreme year already with the weather cycle, your internal and end rhymes are wonderful, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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This is very well thought out as it has been quite an extreme year already with the weather cycle, your internal and end rhymes are wonderful, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
Thank you so much for your kind review and words for this poem about our seemingly endless winters. It really could be worst. Lol
Comment from Ginda Simpson
You met the poetry challenge with a flawless example. I can only imagine how tired you must be of the snow. Always beautiful at first, then tedious and treacherous. Hope it melts soon and that springtime will be glorious for you. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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You met the poetry challenge with a flawless example. I can only imagine how tired you must be of the snow. Always beautiful at first, then tedious and treacherous. Hope it melts soon and that springtime will be glorious for you. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
Thank you so much for your kind review and words for this poem about our seemingly endless winters. It really could be worst. Lol
