Faith is Blue
Septolet 14 word poem in two parts10 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
An excellent presentation portraying this beautiful, graceful flower which also symbolises your faith. I enjoyed the lines: grass teased, tousled by wind and the imagery contained within them. Ticks all the boxes with the septolet. Well done, Debbie
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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An excellent presentation portraying this beautiful, graceful flower which also symbolises your faith. I enjoyed the lines: grass teased, tousled by wind and the imagery contained within them. Ticks all the boxes with the septolet. Well done, Debbie
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from lyenochka
Great choice of words and I like the opening "Faith blooms blue" which with the picture gives us the promise of blooms fulfilled in the blue irises. Congratulations on your second place win!!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Great choice of words and I like the opening "Faith blooms blue" which with the picture gives us the promise of blooms fulfilled in the blue irises. Congratulations on your second place win!!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Poem is displayed colorful with the image of irises. We will see blooming flowers soon, grass that will blow in the wind and will definitely will greet every creature on this earth.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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Poem is displayed colorful with the image of irises. We will see blooming flowers soon, grass that will blow in the wind and will definitely will greet every creature on this earth.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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Thank you for an excellent review.
Comment from Wendy G
A soft and gentle septolet with a very nice presentation. It brings spring and new life to mind. I like the inclusion of faith and grace. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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A soft and gentle septolet with a very nice presentation. It brings spring and new life to mind. I like the inclusion of faith and grace. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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Thank you for a super review.
Comment from pookietoo
This is a lovely nature poem except the poem is supposed to be two stanzas with seven lines total. Best wishes to you.
I love the words tousled by wind.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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This is a lovely nature poem except the poem is supposed to be two stanzas with seven lines total. Best wishes to you.
I love the words tousled by wind.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your kind review. On my computer it shows up as 7 lines. Stanzas are separated with a space that does not count as a line in most poetry contests. Sometimes readers say something else is showing up on their computer or phone screens.
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Yes, now it shows up as seven lines, a beautiful poem.
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I would give you six stars but did not have that option.
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Sure thing! These computers and phones sometimes have a mind of their own, it seems.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Wow this is a really excellent poem. Beautiful imagery. Love the picture very sweet and light and full thank you for the smile brought me!
I adore the picture you chosen as well it's a perfect match of course. I find your poem aesthetically pleasing as well as no issues with grammar or spelling or sentence structure. It all looks very well done to me. Best of luck in the contest!!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Wow this is a really excellent poem. Beautiful imagery. Love the picture very sweet and light and full thank you for the smile brought me!
I adore the picture you chosen as well it's a perfect match of course. I find your poem aesthetically pleasing as well as no issues with grammar or spelling or sentence structure. It all looks very well done to me. Best of luck in the contest!!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an unusual form and it sounds more like a free-write as there is no rhyming here, I enjoyed the colourful blooms here and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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This is an unusual form and it sounds more like a free-write as there is no rhyming here, I enjoyed the colourful blooms here and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your nice review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-You have written a good poem with a good topic.
-Excellent imagery in both verses.
-I like how you give faith a color and personify grass.
-I like the soft imagery in the second verse,
and the positive message about the creatures
being greeted by grace.
-A very good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-You have written a good poem with a good topic.
-Excellent imagery in both verses.
-I like how you give faith a color and personify grass.
-I like the soft imagery in the second verse,
and the positive message about the creatures
being greeted by grace.
-A very good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your detailed and friendly review!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from shelley kaye
love septolet poems!
this was a beautiful image
one suggestion i might make is to maybe use the 'lamp black' background colour and a light blue for one stanza and a yellow for the other stanza... just a thought you can kick around!
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley ð?¦?
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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love septolet poems!
this was a beautiful image
one suggestion i might make is to maybe use the 'lamp black' background colour and a light blue for one stanza and a yellow for the other stanza... just a thought you can kick around!
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley ð?¦?
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your great review! I might try more color combinations another day on longer poems. Good idea.
Comment from Kayliegh
I liked this poem, this was clever! It's near impossible to write a poem that short, and you did really good! I also love the picture! Also quick but important thing, your soul. Have you ever looked at a beautiful painting and thought that the painting painted itself? No, of course not, the painting means there must be a painter. Now imagine every sunrise, sunset, mountain, atom in your body, all your family and friends. Can you imagine that making itself? No of course not there had to have been a someone, a God, to create that. And no matter how good of a person you think you are, you have sinned against that God. But there is still hope for you, that's why Jesus died on the cross for you, yes you. Repent of your sins and trust in Jesus and he will replace your heart of stone for a heart of flesh. I'm not exactly the height of knowledge on the topic, so I would highly recommend that for more information you go to Living Waters on YouTube, please just watch one video and you won't regret it. Alright have a nice day, God bless!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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I liked this poem, this was clever! It's near impossible to write a poem that short, and you did really good! I also love the picture! Also quick but important thing, your soul. Have you ever looked at a beautiful painting and thought that the painting painted itself? No, of course not, the painting means there must be a painter. Now imagine every sunrise, sunset, mountain, atom in your body, all your family and friends. Can you imagine that making itself? No of course not there had to have been a someone, a God, to create that. And no matter how good of a person you think you are, you have sinned against that God. But there is still hope for you, that's why Jesus died on the cross for you, yes you. Repent of your sins and trust in Jesus and he will replace your heart of stone for a heart of flesh. I'm not exactly the height of knowledge on the topic, so I would highly recommend that for more information you go to Living Waters on YouTube, please just watch one video and you won't regret it. Alright have a nice day, God bless!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your nice review. We all need Christ even when it's not Easter.
