Comment from Eleri

Excellent

It is always difficult to comment on such short poems but I do like this one. The idea of flowers curtsying is great and you have easily kept to the syllable requirements of the 2-4-2 competition.
I wish you good luck with it
Eleri

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023

Thank you Eleri! I appreciate your review and your kind words. And i'm really glad that you like it it is hard to make an impact with only eight syllables so appreciate it thank you!

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Lea,
Wow, what a variety of beautiful vibrant colors in these flowers. They illustrate the words well.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Enjoy your weekend
Joan

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023

Thank you, John, I'm really glad you like it. I'd always appreciate your reviews and your comments. So valuable to me as well as your time is to you, so thank you. Again your insight is always refreshing.

reply by dragonpoet on 28-Jul-2023

You?re welcome on all accounts, Lea.
Joan

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Flowers is a 2-4-2 contest entry rich and theme and imagery.
I like your artwork on this picture.Lea.
Short and sweet and to the point.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023

Thank you, I'm really glad you like it. I'm always glad when you like it. And your comments are important to me too. Just so you know, I appreciate your review as always. Thank you, hope your night is grand!

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Ah, the performance ends. The dance is over. Flowers curtsy as the audience leaves, with memories of a beautiful ballet. Lovely piece painted in a few short lines. Great imagery. Well done!

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2023

Thank you so much, June I'm glad you like it! I appreciate your tune and kind comments! I hope your day is great !

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Another fine 2-4-2 verse of a much more upbeat theme with these beautiful flowers! Both simple and evocative sentiments. Good luck in the contest, Lea! Debbie

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023

Thank you, debbie, i'm glad you liked this one! I'm always happy to see our reviews come up during cycle and thought provoking!

Comment from Tirza Savellano

Excellent

Perfect, short poem! I love the image that you paint of flowers curtsying. I can just imagine their petals as dresses. Great job and good luck with the contest!

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023

Thank you Tirza... Is that not an old roman name just curious sounds like it? Very pretty! Thank you for your kind review and for your time and your thoughtful comments! I hope your evening is great!

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

You have presented us with an extremely attractive image here, very appropriate for the entry into summer (at least in the part of the world I come from. Plese keep posting, kay

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023

Thank you so much for your kind For you, I'm very glad you like this. Thank you so much. I'm taking the time to read it and after your comments. I hope your side of the world is beautiful. You have many flowers and sunshine thank you again have a great night!

Comment from Lisasview

Excellent

What a pleasure to find another artfully posted poem of yours....
As always I just love your usage of words...
I will be watching to see to see how the contest goes...
Lisasview

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023

Thank you Lisa, I appreciate your kind review as always. Your comments in your time are appreciated by me! I am very glad that you like these poems. I'm much appreciating your time as well. Have an awesome day! I sent the link too. Thx!

reply by Lisasview on 01-Jul-2023

Oh you did.. I will look for it..

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is a very colorful presentation. I also enjoyed your very descriptive words full of colorful imagery. You did an excellent job with this 242 challenge. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023

Thank you so much again, Alexandra, I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. It was kind of fun to write it! Sometimes you gotta throw a little bit of levity or some brightness in there. These deep poems that we read here not that there are any better aren't any worse than any other calm. Just sometimes some lightness is required. Oh, thank you for your kind comments For your review and for your time! Hope your day is great.

reply by Alexandra Trovato on 01-Jul-2023

I hope your day is great too! I agree about levity 1000%! :)

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

A calming, blissful image. You made your point in a very few words. Hope you do very well in the contest! The color scheme of the box effectively highlighted the flowers in their appearance.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2023

Thank you again i'm happy this pleased now I appreciate your kind comments!