Comment from L. Kalere

Excellent

Very witty indeed. There are probably many women out there who wished they'd thought of this solution. Well done, a great entry in the contest.
Linda

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2023

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

Ha-ha! I love this witty epitaphs contests, you did an incredible job on this one. "she cut off his breathing supplies" brought a big smile on my face.

Witty, humorous and a great presentation. Good luck in the contest.

I once wrote a poem for this contest too. Here it is:

For all your effort
to make my life living hell
you deserve a rest.

Lol. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2023

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I enjoy limericks, and you did a great job with this one as an epitaph. I don't want to say "he had it coming," but . . . well, anyway, thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2023

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hehehe

Great entry for the Witty Epitaph writing prompt contest. Good humor. Nice presentation. Good rhyme that doesn't sound forced.

Good luck.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2023

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is very funny and I enjoyed your sense of humour in this poem as this guy got was was coming to him! Ha ha ha, a fine post for the contest, love Dolly x x x x

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2023

Comment from Cherish Adams

Excellent

Hysterical. This is a good entry for the contest. Love the humor. I think it's something to admire when a person can write so well in a short amount of time. Good luck.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023