r a q
A friend gone5 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Evidently you lost someone that was musical and someone you loved. Life is filled with music wherever you go. Even in heaven, they'll have musical notes to sing with praise.
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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Evidently you lost someone that was musical and someone you loved. Life is filled with music wherever you go. Even in heaven, they'll have musical notes to sing with praise.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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Thank You r a q were his initials
Comment from Lea Tonin1
If I understand this correctly you're saying you had a friend that passed or went away?
I'm a little confused by the lines. 1st one ends with is and the 2nd one begins with is. Should it be "music blue is up there 2?
Perhaps I'm missing something. Or perhaps music flu? Is. Either? An. Instrument or a dog that went with your friend? I'm not sure.
If I may make a suggestion perhaps drop 1 of the words is from your poem? Forgive my confusion obviously it's over my head. I'm unsure how to rate this at this point since I am a little confused. This things change please let me know I will read evaluate. Thank you for your submission hope you have a great night!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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If I understand this correctly you're saying you had a friend that passed or went away?
I'm a little confused by the lines. 1st one ends with is and the 2nd one begins with is. Should it be "music blue is up there 2?
Perhaps I'm missing something. Or perhaps music flu? Is. Either? An. Instrument or a dog that went with your friend? I'm not sure.
If I may make a suggestion perhaps drop 1 of the words is from your poem? Forgive my confusion obviously it's over my head. I'm unsure how to rate this at this point since I am a little confused. This things change please let me know I will read evaluate. Thank you for your submission hope you have a great night!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Thank You
My friend's name was initials of
R A Q. Subtley I saw that as Are(R) (A) (Q)ueue up there. tried to be a little witty.
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Well you are so Sam you are so witty it flew. Over? My head lol. Thank you so much for that have a great night
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Well you are so Sam you are so witty it flew. Over? My head lol. Thank you so much for that have a great night
Comment from Gloria ....
I like this. It's neat, clear, simple and yes very witty too.
A epitaph from musician to musician is always a good connection.
Wishing you much luck in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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I like this. It's neat, clear, simple and yes very witty too.
A epitaph from musician to musician is always a good connection.
Wishing you much luck in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Hi Gloria
enjoyed your comments
Comment from Bill Schott
This witty epitaph, raq, might be a personal entry for a real person; I don't know. Does the word IS need to occur twice? I guess the witty aspect escapes me. I'm assuming that's on me.
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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This witty epitaph, raq, might be a personal entry for a real person; I don't know. Does the word IS need to occur twice? I guess the witty aspect escapes me. I'm assuming that's on me.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Hi Bill
will have to check whether I added an is
r a q - just subtly saying are r there a queue q up there in heaven
r a q - initials of my friend who died
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think the poem in your notes is wonderful, this sounds like a musician friend who will make his music in heaven now, much enjoyed, a tuneful write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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I think the poem in your notes is wonderful, this sounds like a musician friend who will make his music in heaven now, much enjoyed, a tuneful write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Hi Dolly
Yes! R A Q are the initials of a great friend and entertainer to many.