Hell-o from Harry
Epitaph - A cheater suffers grave consequences.2 total reviews
Comment from Amanda Black
Jeez! Poor guy! But not really though, right? I can just imagine actually reading this on someone's tombstone. It's very well written and the rhyming works very well. The word "vengeful" stands out to me as one of the strongest words in the poem.
Good Read! Thanks for sharing!
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Jeez! Poor guy! But not really though, right? I can just imagine actually reading this on someone's tombstone. It's very well written and the rhyming works very well. The word "vengeful" stands out to me as one of the strongest words in the poem.
Good Read! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Oh wow! Lol...harsh punishment!
This is a great witty little poem with an awesome picture I enjoyed quite a bit!
I see no issues grammatically speaking nor do I see any set instructor spelling or grammar issues. It's very well done and follows the contest rules perfectly and it's a fine submission!
Only one small suggestion if I may perhaps bring up the font little bit on your pony. It's being overwhelmed by your picture a little bit too bad though I was thinking of the older people who might not be able to see it.
Excellent poem! I wish you best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Oh wow! Lol...harsh punishment!
This is a great witty little poem with an awesome picture I enjoyed quite a bit!
I see no issues grammatically speaking nor do I see any set instructor spelling or grammar issues. It's very well done and follows the contest rules perfectly and it's a fine submission!
Only one small suggestion if I may perhaps bring up the font little bit on your pony. It's being overwhelmed by your picture a little bit too bad though I was thinking of the older people who might not be able to see it.
Excellent poem! I wish you best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thanks for your thorough review. The picture is a vertical one so it does fill up the screen a bit too much. I took your advice and made the font larger. Sometimes reviewers complain if the font is too big and it wraps to make extra lines, especially when viewed on a small phone screen.
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Absolutely I understand that I ran into a situation like that yesterday on a one line poem that was wrapped up over 3. Thank you so much for your reply and goodluck to you!
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Absolutely I understand that I ran into a situation like that yesterday on a one line poem that was wrapped up over 3. Thank you so much for your reply and goodluck to you!