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My Contribution

I look forward to becoming a part of our earth.

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This witty epitaph, My Contribution, gives voice to the dearly departed and makes it clear that going dust-to-dust is the way the world was made to run.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
    Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A poignant well rhymed small poem for the contest, this is certainly witty and profound, a good entry for the contest, I wish you luck, it will happen to us all in time, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
    Thanks, Dolly, for the read and the response. Hope I mix in with other good dirt.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
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You have written a witty and a perfect epitaph for every one of us. We can take pride in our future contribution to the earth, and hope that we are valued by those who wait in line. Fun poem.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
    Thanks for your read and review. Appreciated.