Comment from Scott Dylan Thomas

Excellent

Great monstitch poem! I love the comparison of space and us. Has a very open feel. The endlessness of both resonated with me.

Thanks for sharing and good luck!

Scott

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Scott!

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your art choice paired perfectly with your thoughtful one
line for the contest, Jessica. I enjoyed reading your entry.
I agree with your words. I liked the cursive font, too. The
universe is endless as is mankind. When it is gone, where
will man be?
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023

Thank you, Jan! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
<3
Jessica

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and presentation, Jessica.
-You have written a good one line poem with a good topic.
-A very good message about the universe, and how
we fit into the scheme of things.
-Anything is possible if we try!
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Pam!
<3

reply by Pam (respa) on 03-Apr-2023

You are welcome, Jessica.

Comment from Aussie

Excellent

Good luck with your contest entry. Not easy to write a 'poem' with one line. I loved the illustration that was perfect for your one-liner. Nothing ever dies; cycle of life transforms. mind you, we are doing a great job in destroying Mother Earth. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023

Couldn't agree more. Thank you for your review!

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Jessica, I like your one line poem for the contest. Yes indeed, the universe is endless and let's we are as well. Who knows these days. Good luck. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023

Thank you, Ulla!! <3

Comment from Kerry Foley

Excellent

This is a very nice one line entry for the contest, my friend.

Nicely done!

I wish you lots of luck!

-Kerry

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023

Thank you, Kerry!

reply by Kerry Foley on 17-Apr-2023

You're welcome.

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Jessica Too true a great one line poem though with excellent image to compliment your word, Sould do well in the voting and would make a great saying, good luck
Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, I appreciate that!

Comment from jake cosmos aller

Excellent

so much wisdom packed into so few words. These micro poems are hard to write so much to say yet so little space for the poet to write. You make it look easy

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, that means a lot to me!!

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

so true - loved this deep one line thought

thank you for sharing it and good luck in the contest!


shelley :)



and now to add a few more words so this review will go through lol

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023

lol love that ! Thank you so much

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I like this poem and the idea behind it. You did a great job with your one line limit. You really are gifted. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Jessi!