Seasons of Change
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Seasons of Change "A collection of 30 poems in thirty days
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Comment from karenina
And so on this last day of April I am trying to make a list of all who participated in this challenge, intending to meticulously work my way through each "thirty days" worth of postings for napowrimo. (smile)
(If you know where I can find the list of all participants please PM me!)
I like the width and breadth of your theme. The only thing permanent is that there will me change ~ and in so many ways!
I like your abc, abc, abc, abc three linie stanzas...and indeed, I also would prefer less cold and "dour" winters and more sunshine days --literally and metaphorically!
I'm just embarking on your journey... Congrats on taking on the challenge, and I look forward to each of your entries!
Karenina
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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And so on this last day of April I am trying to make a list of all who participated in this challenge, intending to meticulously work my way through each "thirty days" worth of postings for napowrimo. (smile)
(If you know where I can find the list of all participants please PM me!)
I like the width and breadth of your theme. The only thing permanent is that there will me change ~ and in so many ways!
I like your abc, abc, abc, abc three linie stanzas...and indeed, I also would prefer less cold and "dour" winters and more sunshine days --literally and metaphorically!
I'm just embarking on your journey... Congrats on taking on the challenge, and I look forward to each of your entries!
Karenina
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Karenina, mynyounhave embarked on a wonderful voyage of reading then 20 plus writers for this year's NaPoWrimo, I sent you a PM with each entry. Enjoy them all.
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GREAT! I sent a PM to Helen but haven't heard back yet... I'm THRILLED you've sent me the complete list! I'm going to dedicate at least an hour a day to catching up and giving support to every writer who took up this challenge! (I've read your first 15 and I'm SMITTEN!)
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
There is much to enjoy in this poem. Some lines or phrases I enjoyed especially: arrival of autumn's archway and slowing the steps of life's ballet. The latter is an excellent metaphor.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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There is much to enjoy in this poem. Some lines or phrases I enjoyed especially: arrival of autumn's archway and slowing the steps of life's ballet. The latter is an excellent metaphor.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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Thank you Verna!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Ingenious. Well done. Here and there it seems a syllable too many but it works. There's little left to say so what follows is an attempt to meet the requirements of FanStory's CEC. They are sticklers that 150 characters be used regardless of the form written.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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Ingenious. Well done. Here and there it seems a syllable too many but it works. There's little left to say so what follows is an attempt to meet the requirements of FanStory's CEC. They are sticklers that 150 characters be used regardless of the form written.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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This is the first time I have read this restriction, where are the CEC?s located
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What? Any time I comment and don't have the necessary characters typed a message appears reminding 150 characters are needed. Since it is asking for more would that be restrictive?
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Oh... My slow brain waves were notoriously firing on on eighth cylindersmeho I responded. Yes 150 characters can be a bit much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You embrace all the seasons here in your poem Jim and we have no choice as seasons are not controlled by us so we may as well enjoy them all and as you say each season offers us different sights, sounds and smells. Your poem not only includes the seasons, but also your opinion of them, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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You embrace all the seasons here in your poem Jim and we have no choice as seasons are not controlled by us so we may as well enjoy them all and as you say each season offers us different sights, sounds and smells. Your poem not only includes the seasons, but also your opinion of them, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-You are off to a good start with your first poem.
-I like your poem with vivid imagery describing time and the seasons.
-The third verse is my favorite with "the steps of life's ballet."
-A very good concluding verse, as well.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-You are off to a good start with your first poem.
-I like your poem with vivid imagery describing time and the seasons.
-The third verse is my favorite with "the steps of life's ballet."
-A very good concluding verse, as well.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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Thanks for the nice validation, Pam!
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You are welcome, Jim.