Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

Almost every word in the poem carries meaning. We could study each word to see how they fit into the entire message. That activity would be very enlightening even to the author of the poem. This is profound.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023

Liz, I couldn't remember even doing this one for a minute! Thank you so much for this review and your comments that all mean so much to me in view of such little reward. You're very kind. Take care Debbie

reply by Liz O'Neill on 17-Aug-2023

I have also read some of my stuff that surfaced & I ask, "Who wrote this? It's good"...lol

Comment from evilynne

Excellent

A well worded short statement about the nature of love. The picture is a nice addition to the words. Your work seems to meet the requirements of the contest. Best of luck!

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023

Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments. Best wishes

Comment from Terry Broxson

Excellent

You are right actions are better than words. Since you were limited in the number of words you chose nicely and along with the picture create an image of what a child might say to their mother in a love poem. Well done. Terry.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Thank you so much for your lovely comments

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This love poem, Love Story, uses fourteen words and seems to say that itb isn't the length of the testimonial of love that counts, but the effort and frequency. Nice.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Thank you so much for your lovely comments