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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello,
Good entry for the 1-1-2-12 writing prompt contest.
well done! I love the words imagery and nice presentation. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Thank you for sharing, good luck..
You have symbols under your poem
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Hello,
Good entry for the 1-1-2-12 writing prompt contest.
well done! I love the words imagery and nice presentation. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Thank you for sharing, good luck..
You have symbols under your poem
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the 1-1-2-12 Poetry contest. The text is a great size. Your message is stated with clarity and is easily understood until you get to the end of your poem. There are three rows of odd symbols. You may want to remove them. The spacing also is imbalanced in your poem box. Drop the first line down from under the visual and try to even out your text in the poem box.
The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a good entry into the 1-1-2-12 Poetry contest. The text is a great size. Your message is stated with clarity and is easily understood until you get to the end of your poem. There are three rows of odd symbols. You may want to remove them. The spacing also is imbalanced in your poem box. Drop the first line down from under the visual and try to even out your text in the poem box.
The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I'm wondering if you want the gremlins at the bottom of the page? Sometimes this happens and you don't realize they have invaded your territory. Like your poem. The words are captivating and well written.
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I'm wondering if you want the gremlins at the bottom of the page? Sometimes this happens and you don't realize they have invaded your territory. Like your poem. The words are captivating and well written.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
Lovely picture which complements the text. The form suits the theme very well. The single syllables suggest the beginning of rain and it gradually increases in intensity and effect!
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Lovely picture which complements the text. The form suits the theme very well. The single syllables suggest the beginning of rain and it gradually increases in intensity and effect!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the process of the rain and its purpose here. I look forward to the rain after having a dry spell. I enjoyed your fine words for spring here, love Dolly x
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I enjoyed the process of the rain and its purpose here. I look forward to the rain after having a dry spell. I enjoyed your fine words for spring here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
Comment from Lady MJ
Loved this! The benefit of rain can be easily understood in the few words used and, especially, tied to the growth of nature. The loved the spacing of the lines which added to the climax of the meaning found in the poem.
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Loved this! The benefit of rain can be easily understood in the few words used and, especially, tied to the growth of nature. The loved the spacing of the lines which added to the climax of the meaning found in the poem.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
Comment from Julie Lau
A nice presentation using the required format. The rain is falling sweetly here at the moment (coastal NSW, Aust.), the sodden earth is letting the lawns grow to knee-height, and I'm on my 4th cuppa for the morning. Good luck for the contest. I'll enter if I can raise the entry money from some reviews. I may call it Bloody rain goes on Forever.
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A nice presentation using the required format. The rain is falling sweetly here at the moment (coastal NSW, Aust.), the sodden earth is letting the lawns grow to knee-height, and I'm on my 4th cuppa for the morning. Good luck for the contest. I'll enter if I can raise the entry money from some reviews. I may call it Bloody rain goes on Forever.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
