A Poetic Pause
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Comment from patcelaw
I found this to be a very interesting format. I have an idea of how I might try the format, but not as an entry for the contest. I plan to do maybe the format in a stacked format, maybe with three stanzas. I wish you the very best in the contest. Patricia.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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I found this to be a very interesting format. I have an idea of how I might try the format, but not as an entry for the contest. I plan to do maybe the format in a stacked format, maybe with three stanzas. I wish you the very best in the contest. Patricia.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Thank you Patricia I hope you're having a good day. Thank you very much for your review as always. I appreciate your kind words and your insight hopefully it's not raining there! Thank you again!
Comment from jessizero
I possibly would have used "off a dog's back" instead of "on a dog's back" but that's just my opinion. Feel free to ignore my advice. I liked your poem. You did a great job with the prompt. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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I possibly would have used "off a dog's back" instead of "on a dog's back" but that's just my opinion. Feel free to ignore my advice. I liked your poem. You did a great job with the prompt. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Cause that is how we learn is it not anyone who can't take a little bit of constructive criticism while i tell ya...lol. Thank you for your review and for taking this time to read it in an offer your kind comments. I hope you have a great day!