Pain
Stops you in your tracks13 total reviews
Comment from JT traveller
Having known many people in my time who suffer from chronic pain I can only extend my sympathies. A great write which really involved the reader in your storytelling through the poetic word. A poem full of lament but also showing how grateful you still remain for the things that you have. J
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Having known many people in my time who suffer from chronic pain I can only extend my sympathies. A great write which really involved the reader in your storytelling through the poetic word. A poem full of lament but also showing how grateful you still remain for the things that you have. J
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you for this thoughtful review. :)
Comment from Ginda Simpson
I feel your pain, literally. It is a source of frustration not to be able to do the things we used to do, but as long as we can reason and remember, and can hold a pen to write, we're good. Keep writing!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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I feel your pain, literally. It is a source of frustration not to be able to do the things we used to do, but as long as we can reason and remember, and can hold a pen to write, we're good. Keep writing!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you for reading my poem and for your insightful comments.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
I applaud you for sharing your pain and I struggle too.
It's as though you took the words out of my mouth, though thankfully I don't yet need a wheelchair.
Pain does bring so much with it among them an overwhelming sadness.
Honestly, effectively and expressed.
Blessings and good luck.
Shirley
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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I applaud you for sharing your pain and I struggle too.
It's as though you took the words out of my mouth, though thankfully I don't yet need a wheelchair.
Pain does bring so much with it among them an overwhelming sadness.
Honestly, effectively and expressed.
Blessings and good luck.
Shirley
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you for this thoughtful review and for your kind words.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Scott Dylan Thomas
You build some real pathos in this poem. I think the topic you speak to is real for many people that I'm sure can relate. Your rhyme and meter are spot on.
Best of luck in the contest!
Scott
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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You build some real pathos in this poem. I think the topic you speak to is real for many people that I'm sure can relate. Your rhyme and meter are spot on.
Best of luck in the contest!
Scott
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you, I appreciate you reading my poem.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Mystery Writer,
A very courageous write.
I, too, often think back to when I could move with far more fluidity than I do now having undergone two total knee replacements, but I still keep moving! And swimming!
Your poem reads well both in rhyme and rhythm.
Despite its realistic content, much enjoyed!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Hello, Mystery Writer,
A very courageous write.
I, too, often think back to when I could move with far more fluidity than I do now having undergone two total knee replacements, but I still keep moving! And swimming!
Your poem reads well both in rhyme and rhythm.
Despite its realistic content, much enjoyed!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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I really want to get knee replacements as well, but I have many health problems that make it risky. I'm so glad you're doing well, thank you for reading my poem.
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My pleasure!
And if you can, please investigate knee replacement. Some of the new procedures are less invasive as they once were. Life-changing!
Be well!
diane
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is an excellent poem. You have captured the essence of aging and its difficulties. I have arthritis and bad knees. Pain is pretty much a constant. I often wonder who came up with the notion that these are our golden years. I have to remind myself from time to time that I can still drive. I can walk, although carefully and not for long distances. I live alone and mostly I can still manage. I have family and friends who look out for me. I am still able to think and write so I won't complain anymore. Growing old is not for sissies but I guess it beats the the alternative. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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This is an excellent poem. You have captured the essence of aging and its difficulties. I have arthritis and bad knees. Pain is pretty much a constant. I often wonder who came up with the notion that these are our golden years. I have to remind myself from time to time that I can still drive. I can walk, although carefully and not for long distances. I live alone and mostly I can still manage. I have family and friends who look out for me. I am still able to think and write so I won't complain anymore. Growing old is not for sissies but I guess it beats the the alternative. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you for this thoughtful and insightful review. I appreciate it so much.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the SAD poem contest. The text is a great size for reading. The message is presented with clarity and is easily understood. Your poem speaks of how you are enduring chronic pain and lack of mobility which has led to a depressive state. It's understandable you feel this way. Your spacing of text is balanced in your poem box. Your visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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This is a good entry into the SAD poem contest. The text is a great size for reading. The message is presented with clarity and is easily understood. Your poem speaks of how you are enduring chronic pain and lack of mobility which has led to a depressive state. It's understandable you feel this way. Your spacing of text is balanced in your poem box. Your visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you for this thoughtful review.
Comment from jessizero
I am sorry for your suffering. I know what it's like to feel like a burden to those who love us. Thank you for sharing your sad poem here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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I am sorry for your suffering. I know what it's like to feel like a burden to those who love us. Thank you for sharing your sad poem here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you for reading my poem and for your kind words.
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Sharon... I so agree with the sentiment you wrote of in this well-written verse. Aging is certainly a challenge, isn't it? Good luck in the contest!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Hello Sharon... I so agree with the sentiment you wrote of in this well-written verse. Aging is certainly a challenge, isn't it? Good luck in the contest!!
Melissa
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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It is, but it's great to still be here! Thank you for reading my poem.
Comment from LyndaS
Oh, I am with you on this! This is a great telling of how your body betrays you in old age. And I think it's totally normal to be angry about it all. And it's depressing as hell. This is a great write, and you totally nailed the subject of pain and sadness. Good luck with this in the contest. Well done.
Lynda
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Oh, I am with you on this! This is a great telling of how your body betrays you in old age. And I think it's totally normal to be angry about it all. And it's depressing as hell. This is a great write, and you totally nailed the subject of pain and sadness. Good luck with this in the contest. Well done.
Lynda
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you for this kind and understanding review.
