dreaming daughter
A father's love lasts forever.4 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the SAD poem contest. The text needs to be one size larger for easier reading. The message is presented with clarity and is easily understood. You use great descriptions for a daughter dreaming about reuniting with her deceased dad. Your poem is imbalanced in the poem box. Drop the first line down one or two spaces so it matches the space at the bottom of your poem. Great spacing enhances the presentation. Your visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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This is a good entry into the SAD poem contest. The text needs to be one size larger for easier reading. The message is presented with clarity and is easily understood. You use great descriptions for a daughter dreaming about reuniting with her deceased dad. Your poem is imbalanced in the poem box. Drop the first line down one or two spaces so it matches the space at the bottom of your poem. Great spacing enhances the presentation. Your visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Sandra. I really
appreciate the 5 star review
and your suggestions. Many
blessings to you. ~
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You are welcome.
Comment from LyndaS
Indeed, this is a reunion to look forward to. This was beautiful and touched my heart. I loved "dreaming daughter ascends starlit harbor". The art you chose goes with this line. Powerful message.
Well done. Lynda
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Indeed, this is a reunion to look forward to. This was beautiful and touched my heart. I loved "dreaming daughter ascends starlit harbor". The art you chose goes with this line. Powerful message.
Well done. Lynda
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much, Lynda!
Writing it was a labor of love.
Many blessings to you. ~
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I can't imagine losing a child and it must haunt and destroy one's whole life and your poem is heartfelt and sad. Your romantic words have such deep meaning here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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I can't imagine losing a child and it must haunt and destroy one's whole life and your poem is heartfelt and sad. Your romantic words have such deep meaning here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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I really appreciate it, dear Dolly. I hope your week is
going just fine. Thank you so
much for reading my sad
poem. It was a labor of
love. Blessings to you xxoo
Comment from papa55mike
That will be a glorious day when that daughter sees her father again and will never leave her again. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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That will be a glorious day when that daughter sees her father again and will never leave her again. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much, Mike.
Poetry contests are very
challenging, so many talented poets and only so
many prizes to give out.
Have a wondrous upcoming
weekend. Blessings ~
