Chronic Cyberspace
When too much Cyberspace and Technology take over41 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
You have hit the nail on the head with this one. The younger generation is going to be in trouble if they don't get their asses out of the chair. That was a really good job with a difficult prompt.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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You have hit the nail on the head with this one. The younger generation is going to be in trouble if they don't get their asses out of the chair. That was a really good job with a difficult prompt.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much Paul for your very kind review. Technology is important cause where would we be without it here? Not here, I guess. LOL...
I appreciate your kind comments dear friend.
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, I couldn't be agree with you more. Kids should not be allowed all hours in cyber space. Surely parents would have a say. A least I would have hoped so. You touch a very important issue in your poem. Good luck.. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Hi there, I couldn't be agree with you more. Kids should not be allowed all hours in cyber space. Surely parents would have a say. A least I would have hoped so. You touch a very important issue in your poem. Good luck.. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much Ulla for your very kind review. Technology is important cause where would we be without it here? Not here, I guess. LOL... We just can't let it take over our lives.
I appreciate your kind comments dear friend.
Comment from Julie Lau
Now that is a really excellent message, and fabulously presented with your choice of illustration and outstandingly lit-up text. I like the way each verse leads on to one of a different, but equally brilliant colour; in all giving a startling futuristic impression. All the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Now that is a really excellent message, and fabulously presented with your choice of illustration and outstandingly lit-up text. I like the way each verse leads on to one of a different, but equally brilliant colour; in all giving a startling futuristic impression. All the best in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much Julie, for your very kind review. Technology is important cause where would we be without it here? Not here, I guess. LOL... We just can't let it take over our lives. Thank you so much for your gift of six stars too! I appreciate them so much and your kind comments dear friend.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This offers a wonderful presentation. The minute poetry is a perfect way to beg those who do not come up for air to rise from their chair. I love the last stanza the most with its curious last line saying stand up to write. This is a strange way to end this piece but I love the mantra of rejecting cyberspace and rising up to fight the good fight.
Jesse
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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This offers a wonderful presentation. The minute poetry is a perfect way to beg those who do not come up for air to rise from their chair. I love the last stanza the most with its curious last line saying stand up to write. This is a strange way to end this piece but I love the mantra of rejecting cyberspace and rising up to fight the good fight.
Jesse
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Jesse, how perceptive of you. Without disclosing anything, let me just say that you and I may be only a few who will understand that stanza. You completely made my day for a couple reasons, as it was so good to see you and also because I knew you would get it. Thanks again my dear friend.
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Yes, I do get it, and I am glad I made your day!
Jesse
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi,
This minute poem is a well written warning to not rely on technology to much,
You should be able to be away from your phone or computer for at least some time every day so you can have a life.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest,
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Hi,
This minute poem is a well written warning to not rely on technology to much,
You should be able to be away from your phone or computer for at least some time every day so you can have a life.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest,
Joan
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much Joan, for your very kind review. Technology is important cause where would we be without it here? Not here, I guess. LOL... We just can't let it take over our lives.
I appreciate your kind comments dear friend.
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You are most kindly welcome. No we wouldn't be here or have these problems.
Joan
Comment from Sanku
It s a perfectly written Minute poem about a very relevant topic. I see people totally engrossed in the cyber world and not bothering to come back to reality ....
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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It s a perfectly written Minute poem about a very relevant topic. I see people totally engrossed in the cyber world and not bothering to come back to reality ....
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much Santha. I so appreciate your wonderful comments and your six stars. You are awesome my very sweet friend.
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
This is so true for all of us and a great topic to write about. We as a society need more of this. It is a shame children are being encouraged to sit and play games. Not healthy at all. Great job!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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This is so true for all of us and a great topic to write about. We as a society need more of this. It is a shame children are being encouraged to sit and play games. Not healthy at all. Great job!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much Kerry. I am so guilty of this, but I still worry about the younger kids and elderly I don't get nearly enough sleep when I am writing more. However that is my fault and will take care of that after I slow down a bit. Thanks for the lovely comments my friend.
Comment from royowen
I was listening to a guy on Sunday who was talking about device addiction, it causes a natural chemical called dopamine overload to cause the addiction, of course it's anti social, it's becoming a real problem with not only the young but older people too, you're right, a beautifully written minute poem, a great job, good luck blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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I was listening to a guy on Sunday who was talking about device addiction, it causes a natural chemical called dopamine overload to cause the addiction, of course it's anti social, it's becoming a real problem with not only the young but older people too, you're right, a beautifully written minute poem, a great job, good luck blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much Roy, for your very kind review. Technology is important cause where would we be without it here? Not here, I guess. LOL... We just can't let it take over our lives.
I appreciate your kind comments dear friend.
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That?s right
Comment from Boogienights
This is a terrific contest entry and so completely true. We focus too much on screens and not enough on what's really around us. I'm not against technology, just the overload of it. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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This is a terrific contest entry and so completely true. We focus too much on screens and not enough on what's really around us. I'm not against technology, just the overload of it. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much Sharon, for your very kind review. Technology is important cause where would we be without it here? Not here, I guess. LOL... We just can't let it take over our lives.
I appreciate your kind comments dear friend.
Comment from strandregs
You're the man
My man
If you're a man
Forget the gender
The subject's too tender.
Anyway.
Your fight is my fight.
Bring kids into the light.
Of day.
It's like they've all become autistic.
Like me sitting in bed all day writing reviews to grow my cents cash.
So then I can smash.
And promote for two more reviews.
Disheartening. :-))Z.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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You're the man
My man
If you're a man
Forget the gender
The subject's too tender.
Anyway.
Your fight is my fight.
Bring kids into the light.
Of day.
It's like they've all become autistic.
Like me sitting in bed all day writing reviews to grow my cents cash.
So then I can smash.
And promote for two more reviews.
Disheartening. :-))Z.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much Strandregs for your very kind review. Technology is important cause where would we be without it here? Not here, I guess. LOL... We just can't let it take over our lives.
I appreciate your kind comments dear friend.
