A Poetic Pause
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Wrung"First Poems
16 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
To his is a 1-6-1 contest entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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To his is a 1-6-1 contest entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thank you Ricky I hope you're doing well appreciate your time. Looking over this after your kind comment have a great night!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I enjoyed your poem. The words are very strong and follow the guidelines well! couldn't feel it was writing about someone who's iying in the graveyard. What a challenge to get all of that, across, so concisely. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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I enjoyed your poem. The words are very strong and follow the guidelines well! couldn't feel it was writing about someone who's iying in the graveyard. What a challenge to get all of that, across, so concisely. Best wishes!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for so happy you liked it! For your time for your review for your kind words I thank you very much. Have a great evening!
Comment from jaded831
Your poem makes the reader see how unimportant much in life means in the end. Live life by God's rules, all that matters is your eternal soul. I am not sure if that was your meaning, but that was my take on it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Your poem makes the reader see how unimportant much in life means in the end. Live life by God's rules, all that matters is your eternal soul. I am not sure if that was your meaning, but that was my take on it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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You are very intuitive. Thank you very much for your review and for your insight and your comments as well as your time always appreciated. Thank you again hope you have a great day
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 1-6-1 poem writing prompt contest .
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Excellent entry for the 1-6-1 poem writing prompt contest .
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you! You're the best! Always appreciate your feedback. Have an awesome day!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the 1-6-1 Contest. The text is a great size. However, I do not understand your meaning in the second line. The twisted heart monopolized for me in this short poem has an unclear meaning.
Your text is balanced well in the poem box. The visual fits perfectly the last word. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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This is a good entry into the 1-6-1 Contest. The text is a great size. However, I do not understand your meaning in the second line. The twisted heart monopolized for me in this short poem has an unclear meaning.
Your text is balanced well in the poem box. The visual fits perfectly the last word. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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It's not the way of saying a kind heart is taken advantage of. Thank you so much for your review for taking the to read this and to offer your kind comments. I thank you very much and I hope you have a great day!
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You are welcome. Have a blessed day too.
Comment from JT traveller
Despite the limitations you managed to create an actual poem. It reads well and is very creative. Melancholy. Deep. Emotive. Your artwork in particular is a standout. Best of luck. J
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Despite the limitations you managed to create an actual poem. It reads well and is very creative. Melancholy. Deep. Emotive. Your artwork in particular is a standout. Best of luck. J
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much I appreciate your review as. Always happy to have your comments and your thoughts and you're time you took to read the review. Hope you have a great night!
Comment from thoughtgame2
I really don't have no one's else work to compare yours to. Because before yours I did not read short poems or 3-line works. I know there is a better way to explain what they are, but I don't care about that. All I know is for certain is that your works hit me very hard every time I read them. My hat off to you again...good job.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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I really don't have no one's else work to compare yours to. Because before yours I did not read short poems or 3-line works. I know there is a better way to explain what they are, but I don't care about that. All I know is for certain is that your works hit me very hard every time I read them. My hat off to you again...good job.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you so glad you liked it appreciate your words. Yeah I mean if they strike a card with you they do something good for you and I am happy. Thank you again for your review and for taking the time to read it and off. Your thoughts have a great day!
Comment from dragonpoet
HI
This poem and the accompanying artwork put together the idea of a person dying from a broken hear.
It matched the prompt well. Good luck,
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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HI
This poem and the accompanying artwork put together the idea of a person dying from a broken hear.
It matched the prompt well. Good luck,
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you Joan! Your comments are always appreciated anything. I can put together. In the wonderful day that for your time I appreciate that too!
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My pleasure.
Joan
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
Wow this poem really nails the problem we have in our country today with drugs. You hit it head on. Extremely clever riffing and the perfect example of a 1-6-1 poem.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Wow this poem really nails the problem we have in our country today with drugs. You hit it head on. Extremely clever riffing and the perfect example of a 1-6-1 poem.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you you're so kind your comments are awesome and incredible insight! Thank you so much for your time and for your review I hope you have a great day!
Comment from royowen
I think every time we are lied to, or given a a bad example in our lives, most by bad parenting and example, or by teachers, peers, can leave us damaged and can lead us on a similar path. Beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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I think every time we are lied to, or given a a bad example in our lives, most by bad parenting and example, or by teachers, peers, can leave us damaged and can lead us on a similar path. Beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you roy for your review and very much appreciated. For your time and for your input I appreciate it so very muchI hope you have a great and wonderful day!
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Welcome