Jesus is the lord
Free verse poem2 total reviews
Comment from JT traveller
The rhyming repetition was a little overwhelming for me.
A small typo, "Leaping qI'm".
You delivered a wonderful message and I see a lot of potential for this poem. I did enjoy it.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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The rhyming repetition was a little overwhelming for me.
A small typo, "Leaping qI'm".
You delivered a wonderful message and I see a lot of potential for this poem. I did enjoy it.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thanks
Comment from kahpot
Love the rhyme words and the message throughout, if I may the fourth line from the bottom, "leaping (qI'm) ..... think this maybe a typo, this is an excellent read, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Love the rhyme words and the message throughout, if I may the fourth line from the bottom, "leaping (qI'm) ..... think this maybe a typo, this is an excellent read, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thanks
