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Comment from Liz O'Neill
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We find out about her character: "Her integrity; so honest and serene" & "Yes, she'll fight, for what she knows is right" & "Her writing's from her heart" This is a nice tribute and way to introduce us. I am going to her portfolio now.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2023

Comment from Boogienights
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This is a very sweet tribute to our new member. I just reviewed one of Jessica's poems and it was so wonderful! Your poem reads like a cheerleaders anthem and I love that.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
    Thank you Sharon. I love your analogy on that! And I am so happy that you checked her out and like her stuff. I don't like using the word newbie, because she came with such respect and yearning to learn more. That is why I call her the New Girl in Town. Thanks again Sharon for your kind review and words.
Comment from Spitfire
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I enjoyed the notes on how you tied for a contest. You certainly have a gift for rhyme. Your lines make me want to read this pretty lady. A great challenge for the month of March.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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How nice of you to to introduce Jessica to us, Debs. You have a huge heart, always helping others. I'm sure our new lady will love this poem, and her introduction. You're a good lady, my friend. Well done. Love and hugs. :)) Sandra

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023

Comment from Pearl Edwards
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This is a nice poem and a lovely thing for you to do Debi introducing Jessica to the wider fan story family in verse and author notes.I will check out her writings.
Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023

Comment from Aussie
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Your kindness doesn't go unnoticed. I will look at her portfolio. When I began on FS in 2010 a lady writer (deceased) helped me learn to write. She held No 1 spot for many years. Look up Adewpearl in eternal flame. Well done friend. K xx

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
    Thanks again Sweetie, for yet another wonderful and kind review. After we saw so many newbies going through with such attitude and giving all these great writers such low scores over critical know it all remarks, Jessica was such a refreshing change and I figured she might get better noticed if introduced and helped. She is a gem and as my mom used to say, that girl has been taught some manners. LOL.... thanks again K for such a lovely review and words for our new girl in town.
reply by Aussie on 18-Mar-2023
    Ignorance is bliss!
Comment from Raul1
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This is a very creative and well crafted poem. A nice dedication to Jessica Wheeler. I have enjoyed reading your sweet poem. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your post. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
    Hi Raul, Thanks so much for such kind words for Jessica; the poem and the woman. She is sweet as well as talented and humble. I know you will like her too.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this new girl in town with us. I know I will enjoy searching her out. Your recommendation is enough to peak my interest. I enjoyed reading your tribute to her.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
    Hey there Barb, thanks so much for such kind words for Jessica; the poem and the woman. She is sweet as well as talented and humble. I know you will like her too.
Comment from Dr. Nad
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Hey Debi, I love how one more time you have immortalized one of your FanStory family members. The words you have chosen to characterize Jessica demonstrate that not only have you read her literary work but you have read her compassionate heart. This not only speaks well of Jessica but also of you. I love the way you have been able to interject the essence of your friend into a strategically unique and challenging rhyming poem scheme. You have once more marked yourself as a writer of distinction! Thanks for sharing. Embrace the love from above.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
    Hey there, bro, you have no idea how good it is to have you back. I really appreciate your kind words for Jessica, the poem, and the woman. She really is a sweet and talented soul for a new girl in town. Thanks also for the gift of six stars. You are the best, your brother and I love having the title of your sister even if it's all in fun.
reply by Dr. Nad on 22-Mar-2023
    Hey sis, it?s your sporadic, bro! L. O. L.
    I really want to get on FanStory more but I?m just trying to figure out this financial thing. I believe I?m a good enough writer ✍️ to make a little bit of money to supplement my income. But, bigger than that is my belief that God has placed something in my heart to say to men who feel disqualified from the their God given dreams by decisions they?ve made, actions they have taken, or atrocities perpetrated on them.

    You are certainly most welcome for the review.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
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You make Jessica sound like I must read her. So, I will look her up and see what all the fuss is about. Besides, it is Women's history month, right?

You have an uncanny knack for making anyone and everyone always sound so good. I hope you are right about this new one :))

So great to be able to read something of yours again Debi.

Gary M

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
    Hello Gary. Thank you so much for the very kind words for Jessica, the woman and the poem. You have no idea how wonderful it is to see your smiley face show up on these reviews I never did give up hope that you would come back to us. Thank you also for your gracious six stars that means so much to me. But not as much as you do my dear dear friend.